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Pride of Tarlandia/Legends
- Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 16:34, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 04:10, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 721 words (158 introduction, 483 body, 80 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 695 words (150 introduction, 465 body, 80 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB WP:WARFARE
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support
- Copy-edit. Please take care with missing links. UberSoldat93
(talk) 17:51, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 22:54, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 02:17, 20 March 2024 (UTC)- Zed42 (talk) 11:11, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:06, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
Object
Imp
Tarlandia system. :PImperators II(Talk) 16:36, 18 March 2024 (UTC)- Didn't know about that one, added now. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 16:39, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
- Didn't know about that one, added now. ThrawnChiss7
Lew
I think Death Squadron could use a small bit of contextLewisr (talk) 20:52, 18 March 2024 (UTC)Inconsistent reffing between the infobox and body about the ship participating at EndorLewisr (talk) 20:52, 18 March 2024 (UTC)- The above objections have been addressed. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 15:02, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
- Oh tbh I was kinda thinking that it should be noted the squadron was Vader's fleet, if that was citable to the pre-existing sources. Maybe I should have been more specific in what I was looking for, my apologies Lewisr (talk) 19:41, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
- Yea, Warfare does mention that. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 21:01, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
- Yea, Warfare does mention that. ThrawnChiss7
- Oh tbh I was kinda thinking that it should be noted the squadron was Vader's fleet, if that was citable to the pre-existing sources. Maybe I should have been more specific in what I was looking for, my apologies Lewisr (talk) 19:41, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
- The above objections have been addressed. ThrawnChiss7
Zed
In the last History sentence, does the "it" in "Because of both its destruction" refer specifically to this ship? It's a little unclear, as the previous sentence talks about the destruction of the Death Star and much of the fleet.Zed42 (talk) 22:26, 18 March 2024 (UTC)- Fair point, specified. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 15:02, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
- Fair point, specified. ThrawnChiss7
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:06, 27 March 2024 (UTC)