Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Praknat 3

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Contents

  • 1 Praknat 3
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Imp
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Praknat 3

  • Nominated by: SilverSunbird (talk) 05:32, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: It got slightly too long.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:NOVELS, WP:AST

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Good work! Imperators II(Talk) 06:22, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:24, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote OOM 224 18:30, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:43, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
  5. Nice~! Fan26 (Talk) 18:11, 23 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • The History section looks beefy enough to me to be able to support an image, perhaps of Trymant IV or the Legacy Run?
  • I feel like the link to desert should be worked into the body, too.
  • The first two sentences of the intro can be shortened quite a bit. You've got all the nitty-gritty details in the body, so there's no real need to retread them in the intro as well. Even something as short as "Praknat 3 was the closest moon of the Outer Rim Territories planet Trymant IV." would do. Imperators II(Talk) 05:48, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. I went for a picture of the Emergence itself. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:53, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Also, I just want to thank Imperators II for the information about the Western Reaches; that had escaped my attention. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:32, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:45, 23 January 2022 (UTC)