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Praknat 3
- Nominated by: SilverSunbird (talk) 05:32, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: It got slightly too long.
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:NOVELS, WP:AST
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Support
Good work! Imperators II(Talk) 06:22, 31 December 2021 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 14:24, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
OOM 224 18:30, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:43, 20 January 2022 (UTC)- Nice~! Fan26 (Talk) 18:11, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
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Imp
The History section looks beefy enough to me to be able to support an image, perhaps of Trymant IV or the Legacy Run?I feel like the link to desert should be worked into the body, too.The first two sentences of the intro can be shortened quite a bit. You've got all the nitty-gritty details in the body, so there's no real need to retread them in the intro as well. Even something as short as "Praknat 3 was the closest moon of the Outer Rim Territories planet Trymant IV." would do.Imperators II(Talk) 05:48, 31 December 2021 (UTC)- Done. I went for a picture of the Emergence itself. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:53, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Also, I just want to thank Imperators II for the information about the Western Reaches; that had escaped my attention. SilverSunbird (talk) 05:32, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:45, 23 January 2022 (UTC)