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Prakas
- Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:10, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: That's right, I'm back to Catalyst noms!
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Support
- yeet, Catalyst was good and I'm here for it -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his)
(talk) 20:11, 28 October 2021 (UTC) 
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:25, 7 December 2021 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 05:46, 4 January 2022 (UTC) - OOM 224 09:08, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:29, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
Object
Fan
"he had Prakas contacted, enabling him to tell Prakas about the Separatist forces on the ground to begin his attack run. " This is confusingly worded.- Better? Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:06, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
"After handing over Morseerian scientists Nan Pakota and Urshe Torr and taking the Ersos aboard, Krennic, while strapping in, ordered his communications technician to contact Prakas as soon as the Good Tidings took off, ordering the technician to ensure Prakas gave them enough time to escape before the attack run." Please break this up into smaller sentences.Fan26 (Talk) 14:38, 20 October 2021 (UTC)- Better? Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:06, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
I get that the second paragraph sets up Prakas's arrival, but it barely mentions him. How would you feel about cutting it down a bit?- Better? Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:44, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
The bit about being an officer doesn't seem like P+T material.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:58, 10 November 2021 (UTC)- Better? Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:44, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
Is the bit about the CIS scientists really relavent?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:15, 15 November 2021 (UTC)- It establishes who the prisoner exchange was for, which plays into the overall operation so yes Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:30, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
Is it really necessary to mention that Zerpen Industries approved of the mission twice?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:45, 26 November 2021 (UTC)- Good? Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:05, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
I'm going to call for the removal of this information: "He spoke Galactic Basic Standard." Pretty much none of our character articles specify that they spoke Basic, and this needs discussion before sitewide implementation.UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:08, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
- Removed Editoronthewiki (talk) 03:47, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
OOM
Why is "new" pipelinked to Phara's faction? "New" here is just being used an adjective for Vallt's government, so the way I see it, the only subject that's being referred to is the latter article, so that's the only thing that needs to be linked."Aware that pro-Republic legions still existed" — who was aware?Has Obitt's species and the Separatist scientists' species are neither relevant to Prakas nor needed for context, so they can be removed."Upon moving toward the communications console" — I don't think this is relevant either.OOM 224 12:58, 4 January 2022 (UTC)- All done Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:38, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:35, 5 January 2022 (UTC)