Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pesmenben IV

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Pesmenben IV

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:09, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Forgot that this guy had gone over 165
• Date Archived: 01:41, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 407 words (42 introduction, 226 body, 139 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 02:04, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:46, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:28, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 21:54, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
5. Lewisr (talk) 00:41, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber

• "he salted its dunes with lithium carbonate[4] in a similar fashion to how he had been duped by a berubian mine in the Borgo asteroid belt[7] to fool its Imperial governor into leasing the planet." If I'm reading this correctly, the mine duped Lando?
  • Fixed.
• Full dates needed for novel and film. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:03, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:15, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
• Something I missed: In-universe mention in The Essential Chronology. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:23, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Mention is carried over to The New Essential Chronology as well. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:33, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:15, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
• Looks like there's space for an image of Lando. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:50, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
  • I decided to handle this myself since JMM is away. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:54, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Thanks, would have gotten to it eventually but 'tis appreciated. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:54, 18 May 2023 (UTC)

Imp

• Sounds like dunes is something that should be noted in 1) the infobox and 2) Description.
  • Added.
• The dunes and/or the presence of the ore deposits (the comparison to Ruusan not necessarily) sounds like worth noting in the intro, to beef it up just above that two-sentence mark.
  • Added.
• A bit of pronoun collision: "forcing him to throw his bribe overboard when his associates, the 'union officials,' raided them" — this is the governor throwing a bribe overboard while Calrissian's associates raided them? Imperators II^(Talk) 17:07, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
  • I do think so, but I've read the passage several times in the novel and can't really picture what Calrissian's actual scheme was. I'll send it to you on Discord. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:19, 14 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:39, 20 May 2023 (UTC)