Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pellaeon (second nomination)

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Pellaeon

  • Nominated by: TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:01, July 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The original nomination was took down at my request after Toprawa had pointed out that Pellaeon would possibly require a significant expansion with the release of the then-upcoming novel Thrawn: Alliances. The book is released today and he is not in it, so here I go for a second nomination.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. I fixed a few linking problems, but other than that, great work! --White-Helmeted Mandalorian/Riverdale Chauffeur (Wanna Discuss Something?) 18:56, July 24, 2018 (UTC)
  2. I look forward to a time when this article needs an update. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:13, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Nice work. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:48, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 10:27, August 21, 2018 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 18:01, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Get Commander Code-8
  • Missing any mention of Pellaeon's sex in the bio
    • Added it to the Personality and traits section if it is okay for you. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:26, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • I don't know if this came up in the original nomination but I think there's enough to warrant a P&T section, his shock at seeing the purrgil could go there
  • I'm not a fan of the "several unidentified objects" going in the body in quotations, since that's already seen in the above quote, maybe you could reword it to say several objects unfamiliar to the Imperials without using the quotations. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:11, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
    • Just realized that this one is explicitly allowed under the manual of style, so there's no pressure to change it. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:35, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
      • I know it's not mandatory, but I get what you mean. Changed it anyway. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:50, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • Is there room to create an article for whale, since "whale-like" is used to describe the purrgil here and in most sources?
    • As far as I can find, there is no mention of "whales" in the new canon except for the Databank entry for the purrgil and I didn't think that would be enough for an in-universe whales article. For now, I've linked it to a disambiguation page for other whale-like creatures in the Star Wars universe, but I can easily create a new "whale" article if you think otherwise. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 12:16, August 10, 2018 (UTC)
      • Per Tommy below a disambig link isn't the way to go about it. I think the current whale page can be moved to Whale (disambiguation) and a new one created in its place. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:39, August 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • Is it necessary to refer to Dave Filoni as the executive producer of Rebels after he's already been introduced as one of the writers? Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:38, August 10, 2018 (UTC)
  • Last one: Please switch that use of "however" in the bio, it's making that sentence confusing to me. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:09, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
Tommy
  • It's generally bad practice to link to disambig pages in article text. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 17:41, August 10, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:02, August 21, 2018 (UTC)