Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pammant/Legends

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Pammant

• Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 01:47, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I echo Cav's statement: I was bored, so I wrote this nom.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. I'm all for bored noms, especially when on non-characters! --Eyrezer 06:35, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
2. Great. Xd 20:17, February 13, 2010 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:59, February 14, 2010 (UTC)
4. Nice and clean. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 20:56, February 19, 2010 (UTC)
5. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 09:50, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
6. Those kriffin' Quarrens and their tunnels... --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:51, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Xd
   • Get that TCW crap to the article =P (I mean, remove the update tag). Xd 15:32, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
     • Relax, I'm working on it. :p Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 15:34, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
   • No quotes, not even from Breakout Squad? Xd 19:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)
     • Added, with help from CC. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:12, February 13, 2010 (UTC)
2. Can you find a relevant image that might work somewhere in the article, perhaps of the Malevolence or the Invisible Hand? CC7567 ^(talk) 21:52, February 14, 2010 (UTC)
   • Two added - one of a Quarren, the other of the Malevolence. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 22:48, February 14, 2010 (UTC)
3. Farl likes Mon Calamarians better, but let's have a look at this Quarren stuff
   • Intro says Pammant is near Dac ("of nearby Dac"); History only says that Pammant and Dac are connected through a hyperlane, which does not neccessarily mean that they were near each other. No info should be only in the intro.
     • I thought that sentence was pretty clear, but some context added.
   • You say four times that Pammant was a "tunneled" world. First, could you use a synonym instead of repeating the same exact word so many times (Or even not using the word so much)?
     • This goes along with my next response. Since there are no details on the nature of the "tunnels," I chose to repeat "tunneled" rather than insert a potential synonym and risk getting the meaning wrong. I did remove one occurrence of "tunneled," however, but the other ones are necessary to the description of Pammant.
   • Second, what do you mean by "a tunneled world"? Did it naturally have many tunnels, or did the Quarrens dig it?
     • No source has yet clarified why it was tunneled, where they were natural (i.e., caverns) or dug out by the Quarrens (i.e., excavated). Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:46, February 19, 2010 (UTC)
   • Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:46, February 19, 2010 (UTC)
4. Soresu
   • Could you give some indication of time frame in the second paragraph?
     • Done.
   • When you say "home" of the ships, do you mean where they were constructed, or where they were stored/kept between missions? SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 21:43, February 19, 2010 (UTC)
     • Where they were constructed. I reworded that sentence a bit to clarify. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:19, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:46, February 22, 2010 (UTC)