- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Palejo Reshad
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 20:39, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Wonder if he's ever attempted the Kessel Run.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 12:47, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 10:13, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
Solid. Winchester 327 (talk) 18:27, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
- Tweaked a few things, but good work.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 00:56, July 15, 2012 (UTC) - Great job on the edits. Winchester 327 (talk) 23:39, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Lady Madonna, children at your feet. Wonder how you manage to make ends meet? Menkooroo (talk) 04:52, July 20, 2012 (UTC)- There were some simple errors that could've been corrected. JangFett (Talk) 02:03, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
Object
501st
Link for the blackmailer?- He is linked already as Blackmailer, his nickname. Granted, this is not pipelinked at first mention.
- Sorry about that, thought that was a disambig page (never actualy clicked on it)
- He is linked already as Blackmailer, his nickname. Granted, this is not pipelinked at first mention.
Since you sourced the last paragraph of the BtS, could you do that for the first?- Done.
You should also mention in the BtS that he received an entry in the Encyclopedia.- Taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi 16:13, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
- Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 13:06, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
Winchester 327
Sorry to retract. Not sure how I missed it before; repetitive/awkward phrasing:
- "Shortly afterward, Reshad watched as Jabba dropped his slave dancer Oola into his rancor pit. Reshad was in the courtroom shortly afterward when Leia Organa, another of Solo's allies, arrived in the disguise of the bounty hunter Boushh."
"Shortly afterward, Reshad watched as Jabba dropped his slave dancer Oola into his rancor pit." & "Skywalker himself then arrived to demand their release, and Reshad watched as Jabba dropped him down into the rancor pit."
I also don't like the use of the compound word "courtroom" because it's only used for a court of law in English. Unless you have a source that uses this, and you very well might, then "audience chamber" or "main audience chamber" would be more appropriate. ("Reshad was in the courtroom shortly afterward when Leia Organa, another of Solo's allies, arrived....")- I think I got rid of all cases of repetitive wording, don't know how that happened. And similarly changed "courtroom" into "main audience chamber." However, I would just like to note that other articles also use the term "courtroom" to describe that room. Unless they too are in the wrong. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:57, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
- Sure, but are those other articles as good as this one? Anyway, like I said, it could well be appropriate if there's a source (other than the Wook). I just checked the Return of the Jedi novelization and only the words "court" and "courtier" ever show up. "Court room" (two words) could work in American English, but the compound word is specific to judicial proceedings. It applies to the GFFA if there's ever been a source to use it, otherwise, no. There's still another occurrence in your article—start of the final paragraph in Reshad's biography; sorry for being nit-picky, especially if it turns out there's a source in support of it. You really did good work on the wording! This is a great article. Winchester 327 (talk) 07:37, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Got rid of the last mention of "courtroom." Don't know how I missed that. Anyhow tbh I'm not sure about any official canon sources saying "courtroom." And those other articles I talked about were also good articles. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:36, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Awesome, thank you. Wow, good articles? I'll keep a look out for that word in the sources, but I might end up doing some edits eventually... nit-picky, yes, but even the small things need to be correct. I'm stoked that you used the credit icon. Winchester 327 (talk) 23:27, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Got rid of the last mention of "courtroom." Don't know how I missed that. Anyhow tbh I'm not sure about any official canon sources saying "courtroom." And those other articles I talked about were also good articles. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:36, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Sure, but are those other articles as good as this one? Anyway, like I said, it could well be appropriate if there's a source (other than the Wook). I just checked the Return of the Jedi novelization and only the words "court" and "courtier" ever show up. "Court room" (two words) could work in American English, but the compound word is specific to judicial proceedings. It applies to the GFFA if there's ever been a source to use it, otherwise, no. There's still another occurrence in your article—start of the final paragraph in Reshad's biography; sorry for being nit-picky, especially if it turns out there's a source in support of it. You really did good work on the wording! This is a great article. Winchester 327 (talk) 07:37, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
- I think I got rid of all cases of repetitive wording, don't know how that happened. And similarly changed "courtroom" into "main audience chamber." However, I would just like to note that other articles also use the term "courtroom" to describe that room. Unless they too are in the wrong. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:57, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:03, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
- With thanks to Sompeetalay, StarsiderSWG and Menkooroo for their help. Hanzo Hasashi 20:39, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
- Will be away from the 30th to the 12th. I might still occasionally pop back on to check for objections, if not then I'll get to them afterwards. Hanzo Hasashi 03:55, June 26, 2012 (UTC)