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Oathkeeper
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:29, 24 May 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Did not think this would show up in live-action when I wrote the original CAN.
- Date Archived: 23:32, 6 July 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 512 words (87 introduction, 318 body, 107 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 474 words (86 introduction, 289 body, 99 behind the scenes)
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Support votes
- Excellent subject choice!AxMech (talk) 17:48, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:32, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
- Mor9347
(Talk) 17:35, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:06, 4 July 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 23:01, 6 July 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 23:31, 6 July 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Mor
Do you think a Template:Youmay to the Unidentified Oathkeeper could be useful?Mor9347
(Talk) 16:25, 24 May 2025 (UTC)
- I generally don't see a huge need for youmay when the other article is already linked in the body, but added it anyhow. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:18, 24 May 2025 (UTC)
AxMech
Some links are missing, including Chair of the Senate (depending on consensus could be replaced with Vice Chair) and gold- Was unaware of the chair page so have linked that, but haven't linked gold as this is refering to the color not the material. For future reference I'm happy for folks to add linking in copy-edits if they wish. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
- Noting my copy-edit here.
- Was unaware of the chair page so have linked that, but haven't linked gold as this is refering to the color not the material. For future reference I'm happy for folks to add linking in copy-edits if they wish. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
Requires some expansion on the Ghorman session, including Bail specifically invoking Article 17-252 to allow Mothma to speak. Also some expansion on the Oathkeeper's role, such as confirming the quorum, opening the session in the name of the Emperor, etc.AxMech (talk) 20:47, 27 May 2025 (UTC)- I didn't include Article 17-252 as it doesn't directly tie to the role of oathkeeper at all as far as the episode shows. Impressive hearing on the opening stuff though, hadn't been able to make out what was being said with Erskin and Cassian talking over it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
- He specifically says "With the power conferred on me by our Galactic Emperor, I formally call...". This detail should imo be added to the Description, eg. "Acting in the name of the Galactic Emperor, the Oathkeeper called for senators to make themselves known as the session began..." Also re: Article 17-252 its implementation during the Ghorman session is related to the Oathkeeper as it shows that he doesn't have the power to override such bureaucracies, despite "the agenda being set" and him "not intending to allow anyone else to speak".AxMech (talk) 23:17, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
- Misheard the Emperor bit, so added that, and added the article, although still feels a bit tangental. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:17, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
- He specifically says "With the power conferred on me by our Galactic Emperor, I formally call...". This detail should imo be added to the Description, eg. "Acting in the name of the Galactic Emperor, the Oathkeeper called for senators to make themselves known as the session began..." Also re: Article 17-252 its implementation during the Ghorman session is related to the Oathkeeper as it shows that he doesn't have the power to override such bureaucracies, despite "the agenda being set" and him "not intending to allow anyone else to speak".AxMech (talk) 23:17, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
- I didn't include Article 17-252 as it doesn't directly tie to the role of oathkeeper at all as far as the episode shows. Impressive hearing on the opening stuff though, hadn't been able to make out what was being said with Erskin and Cassian talking over it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
Braha
I think it'd play nicer to the BtS narrative if the appearance in "What a Festive Evening" came first, and then the promo showing that scene was mentioned after, since it's just teasing what's eventually gonna show up in that episode.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:37, 28 May 2025 (UTC)- How's that look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:31, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
- Given it a lil' tweak. Hope that's fine with you! Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:32, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
- How's that look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:31, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:31, 6 July 2025 (UTC)