Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Night of a Thousand Tears

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Night of a Thousand Tears

• Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:51, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:So when during the siege did Rex allow his troops to massacre Maul's super commandos from the air?

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Support

1. Remember when the Siege of Mandalore was a Good article…Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 15:12, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 23:00, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:13, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
4. Huh, I didn't know Joe Schreiber is still writing Star Wars OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:29, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:53, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Object

B…raha'tok

• "Gideon's knowledge of the night and other information about Djarin and his allies—former New Republic shock trooper Carasynthia Dune and former Magistrate Greef Karga—was starling to the three of them." Two things:
  • Do you mean startling?
    • Fixed Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:33, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Do you think this info is relevant enough for the Night of a Thousand Tears? I'm a bit iffy on it. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:36, 29 May 2021 (UTC)
    • I personally find that it works, his level of knowledge impacts the three of them Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:33, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Sure thing! Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 06:59, 30 May 2021 (UTC)

"Rex commits a war crime"

• I think an image with more connection to the event than a guy who knew about it would be appropriate, could be one of Mandalore, a repeating blaster, or the actual Siege.
  • I couldn't decide between an image of Mandalore or an image of the actual siege. So, I chose an image of both Mandalore and the siege Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:08, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
    • I applaud your problem solving skills. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 15:12, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
• Standard day can be pipelinked in mentions of night, and music with songs
  • Done Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:08, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
• Mandalorian Civil War is infobox exclusive. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:25, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Added Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:08, 31 May 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• The date needs to be updated with this, and the note preferably pipelinked like this. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:40, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:29, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Corrected the wording. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:25, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
• Per Layout Guide, there should be an Aftermath section. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:25, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Done Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:32, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
    • There is now space for another image and possibly a paragraph break. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:11, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
      • Good? Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:33, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• I presume there's no more quotes? Regarding the images, can you try shortening the caption of the second image and widen the image itself?
  • No more quotes related to the night. Also, shortened caption and widened image Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:15, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
• A bit of resolution to the skirmish on Nevarro would be nice. A little context as to the result of the conflict would do.
  • Done Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:15, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
• Why is the archiveurl for the Disney pdf different from the actual url? They should be the same. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 11:02, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Striking here since it's like that on status articles. The links should still be changed, but that's less so to do with this nom and more so an issue for various other articles. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:21, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Well, fixed anyway Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:23, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Thanks, that would come in handy. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:29, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:53, 4 July 2021 (UTC)