Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nemen Ull

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Nemen Ull

  • Nominated by: Jinzler (talk) 10:39, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Jedi

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 20:09, March 28, 2013 (UTC)
  2. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 02:28, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:20, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:10, April 12, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote I added the approximate date to the intro and balanced out the paragraph lengths in the biography, but good work. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 05:24, April 16, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 05:29, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • You don't link to the Confederacy in the intro, and I suggest you say that both the battle droids and the tank droid are Confederates.
    • Fixed --Jinzler (talk)
      • I would still say that the battle droids are Confederates as well.
        • I would say that too. Check it out now. --Jinzler (talk) 09:09, March 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • I would mention the Clone Wars by name, instead of pipe linking it.
  • "Circa 22 BBY, shortly after the Mon Calamari..." You might want to clarify here. Is the Mon Calamari a battle?
    • Yeah, that was a typo. Fixed --Jinzler (talk) 20:42, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • I would add a Powers and Abilities section. The ability to hold off legions of battle droids would go under that section.
    • I'm not sure that I would agree. It's not a specific ability and the addition of that information to a P&A section wouldn't add anything new to article, because the reader would already know from reading the biography section that he was capable of doing that. --Jinzler (talk) 20:42, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
      • I guess so. 501st dogma(talk) 21:21, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • I know this is picky, but the intro says one tank droid killed him, while the bio says multiple ones did. 501st dogma(talk) 20:26, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
    • Fixed, thanks for your review --Jinzler (talk) 20:42, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Could we get an article for the missing child?
  • Same for the apartment complex, if you think there's enough info there. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:48, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done, for both of them. Cheers. --Jinzler (talk) 15:12, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:29, April 16, 2013 (UTC)


  • No quotes are available and there is no information from the source that could go in a P&A section. --Jinzler (talk) 10:39, March 27, 2013 (UTC)