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Nal Koska
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 20:15, July 27, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Former GA
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:39, July 30, 2015 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:43, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
- Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:59, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:25, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
- Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:26, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
Object
Floyd
"During the Galactic War between the Galactic Republic and the resurgent Sith Empire in the year 3642 BBY, an Imperial Intelligence agent was willing to defect to the Republic on Nal Koska." Sentence is identical in the intro and body.IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:44, July 28, 2015 (UTC)- Reworded. Is it any better? Imperators II(Talk) 09:06, July 28, 2015 (UTC)
"Nal Koska was first pictured in the entry for the planet Nal Hutta in The Holonet feature of the official website for Star Wars: The Old Republic, a 2011 massively multiplayer online roleplaying game developed by BioWare. Nal Koska was depicted in a schematic of the Y'Toub system." Does it depict the planet itself, or just its orbit? If the latter, I don't think you can really say that it was "pictured."IFYLOFD (Talk) 01:17, July 29, 2015 (UTC)- The schematic shows both Nal Koska's orbit and a dot on the orbit that represents Nal Koska. Imperators II(Talk) 07:42, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
Ayrehead
Could you mention which crew skill the mission is included in for SWTOR?Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:13, July 31, 2015 (UTC)- Added. Imperators II(Talk) 09:43, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:34, August 4, 2015 (UTC)