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Marl
- Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:26, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: When I played KotOR all those years ago, my younger brother thought Marl was based on Darth Maul, due to the former's double-bladed vibrosword, XD. WP:KOTOR for the win.
(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)
Support
- Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:59, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 05:03, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:55, March 14, 2013 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:51, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 14:46, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
Cade Calrayn 03:39, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 20:11, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Mention alternative outcomes in the BTS, such as if Revan loses to Marl. From reading articles Deadeye Duncan and Taris dueling ring, I can also see that the player can choose to not even enter duels.Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:44, March 6, 2013 (UTC)- Nothing really happens if you lose to Marl, although I did note that Revan could choose to skip the arena altogether.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:53, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
There have to be quotes that can go in the other two sections."Marl's career spanned nearly twenty years, and by 3,956 BBY, he became the dueling champion after the retirement of Bendak Starkiller, but was eventually defeated by the Rodian Twitch." I think these thoughts should go in different sentences. Right now the flow isn't great.Couldn't him switching to vibroblade after Two-Fingers' accident be able to go in the bio as well?IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:09, March 8, 2013 (UTC)- All taken care of. Thanks for the review, Floyd.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 06:06, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
Is there an article to link to for the Sith invasion of Taris?Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:56, March 13, 2013 (UTC)- Linked.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:18, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
Nitpicky, but can we call Revan a soldier since it is one of three possible classes a player could choose? Or has soldier been canonized over the other two?- Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 11:11, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
- Referenced.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 15:05, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
You use both "Two-Fingers's" and "Two-Fingers'" in the article. I'm not entirely sure which is correct, but I am sure that they need to be consistent.- Fixed.
The other duelists in the ring all seem to have some sort of nickname, but Marl's name seems closer to a regular name. Do you think its safe to assume that Marl is his real name, since all of the other duelists had nicknames. (assuming that Twitch probably isn't a Rodian name) This is more of a question, but I thought that it merited notice.- The game makes no indication that his name isn't real, and I don't think we can assume one way or another.
- That's probably the best way to go.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 14:46, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
- That's probably the best way to go.--Exiled Jedi
- The game makes no indication that his name isn't real, and I don't think we can assume one way or another.
- That's it, good work.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 13:19, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you sir, please advise if anything else is required.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 14:27, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
Cadeth
Context on Great Sith War? You give it for the Jedi Civil War later on. CadeCalrayn 03:39, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
- Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 03:27, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:11, March 25, 2013 (UTC)