Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Marl

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Contents

  • 1 Marl
    • 1.1 (4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Floyd
        • 1.1.2.2 Toprawa
        • 1.1.2.3 Cav
        • 1.1.2.4 Exiled Jedi
        • 1.1.2.5 Cadeth
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Marl

  • Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:26, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: When I played KotOR all those years ago, my younger brother thought Marl was based on Darth Maul, due to the former's double-bladed vibrosword, XD. WP:KOTOR for the win.

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:59, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 05:03, March 10, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:55, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:51, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:46, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 03:39, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 20:11, March 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  • Mention alternative outcomes in the BTS, such as if Revan loses to Marl. From reading articles Deadeye Duncan and Taris dueling ring, I can also see that the player can choose to not even enter duels. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:44, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
    • Nothing really happens if you lose to Marl, although I did note that Revan could choose to skip the arena altogether.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:53, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
  • There have to be quotes that can go in the other two sections.
  • "Marl's career spanned nearly twenty years, and by 3,956 BBY, he became the dueling champion after the retirement of Bendak Starkiller, but was eventually defeated by the Rodian Twitch." I think these thoughts should go in different sentences. Right now the flow isn't great.
  • Couldn't him switching to vibroblade after Two-Fingers' accident be able to go in the bio as well? IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:09, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • All taken care of. Thanks for the review, Floyd.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 06:06, March 8, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Is there an article to link to for the Sith invasion of Taris? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:56, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
    • Linked.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:18, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • Nitpicky, but can we call Revan a soldier since it is one of three possible classes a player could choose? Or has soldier been canonized over the other two? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:11, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
    • Referenced.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 15:05, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • You use both "Two-Fingers's" and "Two-Fingers'" in the article. I'm not entirely sure which is correct, but I am sure that they need to be consistent.
    • Fixed.
  • The other duelists in the ring all seem to have some sort of nickname, but Marl's name seems closer to a regular name. Do you think its safe to assume that Marl is his real name, since all of the other duelists had nicknames. (assuming that Twitch probably isn't a Rodian name) This is more of a question, but I thought that it merited notice.
    • The game makes no indication that his name isn't real, and I don't think we can assume one way or another.
      • That's probably the best way to go.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:46, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
  • That's it, good work.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:19, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thank you sir, please advise if anything else is required.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 14:27, March 22, 2013 (UTC)
Cadeth
  • Context on Great Sith War? You give it for the Jedi Civil War later on. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 03:39, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 03:27, March 24, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:11, March 25, 2013 (UTC)