Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mahara Kesh

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Mahara Kesh

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 19:41, February 23, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: <shockandawe>A non-Project Hero Cadenom!</shockandawe>

(3 ACs/2 User/5 Total)

Support

1. If you want to shock me, you need to nominate something from the movie eras...--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:42, March 4, 2014 (UTC)
2. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:06, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
3. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:14, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
4. IRC reviewed IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:04, March 26, 2014 (UTC)
5. Thunderforge (talk) 04:36, March 31, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi

• "A rectangular stone island with smooth and steep walls..." Do you mean that the island had walls that were smooth and others that were steep, or were the same walls both smooth and steep?
• Just checking, but is the term ziggurat used to describe the structure? If not, you probably should not use the term to describe the temple as it had been used to describe other buildings in-universe.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:36, February 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • Both done. Cade Calrayn 21:30, March 3, 2014 (UTC)

Cav

• You in Mahara Kesh, the Temple of Healing. - are you missing a word or two here at the start, or is it just the way the speaker is wording the sentence? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:08, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nah, it's not monkeyspeak. Fixed. Cade Calrayn 22:49, March 10, 2014 (UTC)

Lee's charge

• Is the second sentence of the quote really necessary?
  • Removed.
    • I'm sorry for the error, but I originally meant the top quote.
      • Eh... I don't think it hurts to have the full quote. Cade Calrayn 12:31, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
        • Ok, I'm convinced. ;) Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:06, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
• One of the Tho Yor traveled to the Deep Ocean: This sounds to me like the ship is living or something. Could you reword it?
  • Not really. For all we know, they are alive... They were moving of their own accord. Cade Calrayn 12:15, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
• Nice one. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:08, March 13, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:11, March 31, 2014 (UTC)