Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Leyli (second nomination)

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Leyli

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 08:17, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Let's do this.
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Support

  1. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:46, 21 May 2021 (UTC)
  2. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 23:25, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 23:05, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Made a few tweaks, but otherwise good to go. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:50, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote OOM 224 16:22, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Supreme Emperor Holocomm 21:43, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • I think that body image is way too big.
  • Is there an article for Leyli's city?
  • I've skimmed through the comic and a few claims here seem quite speculative to me. "To avoid fear and panic in the community" "willing to bravely offer help"
  • As far as I know we don't include individuals in the affiliations field. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:43, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
    • All done. OtterSurf (talk) 15:19, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Just jumping in here with regard to the last point, it may be worth mentioning Rigosso includes an individual in his affiliations field. While the article is no longer a GA, the individual was included in affiliations when the article was granted GA status. Not positive if there's any actual rule as to whether this should be done or not, however (and if there is, it's possible it's changed since Rigosso's article became a GA). DwartiiDelver (talk) 20:12, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
        • With that example I can see why it might be better to keep it. Striking the objection for now but this may be a bigger discussion.
  • "quite understandably" feels like a NPOV violation, I'd just remove that phrase. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:25, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Looking over the article, the images are too small. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:41, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Also, is there another image you can use in the Biography to better illustrate the events described in that section? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:55, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
SE
  • Bio-Where was the Imperial base located, Corellia or Talus? Supreme Emperor Holocomm 16:29, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Tralus. I've clarified that in the bio. OtterSurf (talk) 17:26, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I presume there are no applicable quotes for the Equipment section?
  • Been a while since I read this one, was it just Luke and Wedge that travelled to Weir's base?
  • Was Numb found dead at the base or elsewhere? Supreme Emperor Holocomm 16:12, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Does it ever elaborate on why Leyli kept it from the queen? Supreme Emperor Holocomm 15:50, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • The second paragraph of "Biography" start 3 of 4 sentences with "Leyli." We should vary that wording.
  • We can definitely add something about her distrust of the report on Vader's death to the P&T section. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 22:47, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • WP:I: If any part of the text in the bubble is cut off, the remaining text must be removed. OOM 224 21:01, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Surely that only goes for text in the specific bubble that's been cut off? All of the text in the unaffected bubble is intact. OtterSurf (talk) 09:17, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Striking for now OOM 224 09:33, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Okay, so the first issue is set one week after Endor. It then says that the Rogues went to Corellia one week afterwards, which places their trip there two weeks after Endor. We don't know how much time has passed between their mission on Corellia and their meeting with the Selonians. Based on all this, please revise the timeframe in the article. OOM 224 10:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • "and upon landing encountered the local Selonian community, including Leyli"
    • Not really. Again, we don't know how much time had passed between the Rogues landing and them finding the Selonian tunnel-city.
    • Also, the comic states that they spoke with Leyli shortly after arriving at the city, not immediately.
    • Plus, the comic indicates quite clearly that the Rogues entered a golden building before speaking with Leyli inside, so the location here should be specified.
  • "and enlisted several Selonian scouts" — Where is it said that there were several scouts? Also, all the Rogues on that mission were led there, so I'd just replace "Skywalker and Antilles" with "them" in that line.
  • It's worth mentioning that the Imperials were defeated and evacuated their base since it ties into their relations with the Selonians there. OOM 224 11:03, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
    • All points have been addressed. OtterSurf (talk) 11:17, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I'll look over them now. Meanwhile:
    • You could just use this and this for Luke's height.
      • I'm having some trouble with the template and the relevant page doesn't help much. OtterSurf (talk) 11:59, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
      • I've reverted to TNEGTC as I cannot figure out this template. OtterSurf (talk) 12:53, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
        • You could just copy the template from other articles and adjust it for the entry I've linked above. The GA Bombing of Gus Talon uses the template, for example. Or even non-status articles, such as Luke Skywalker/Legends. OOM 224 13:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC),
          • Those are for the Databank, not the Encyclopedia. I don't understand why TNEGTC is unsuitable since it contains the exact same info. Can we not just take the height thing out? We can see she's tall but we don't have a precise height. OtterSurf (talk) 13:28, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
            • Sigh. All you need to do here is take the Luke Skywalker entry of the Encyclopedia that's listed on this Sources list and literally copy and paste that to this article. OOM 224 14:46, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
              • Is this what you were looking for? LucaRoR (Talk) 19:04, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
                • Yes, but please also see this copy-edit. OOM 224 20:14, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
    • To minimise the amount of references, please see if any oftheotherexisting refs be used to source the 4 ABY date OOM 224 11:21, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • "at a golden building in the city" — what city? This is the first and only time any city has been mentioned in the article, so it's a point of potential confusion for readers. OOM 224 11:26, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:55, 30 August 2021 (UTC)


  • Feel free to remove this nomination as I will no longer be addressing objections. OtterSurf (talk) 14:43, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I will address eventual further objections. LucaRoR (Talk) 09:44, 30 August 2021 (UTC)