Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lennox

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Lennox

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:45, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Right, let's get these ESB noms back on track

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Good job. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:57, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:40, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Objections addressed via IRC. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 15:36, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
  4. TK-462 (talk) 19:55, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:22, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
  6. ACvote MasterCommerce GuildFredcerique 22:17, April 25, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Hanzo
  • It's not clear from the movie credits alone that John Dicks plays Lennox as opposed to one of the other credited Imperial officers. You need an independent citation for the fact he plays Lennox. The Legends page has a citation for reference, which I can directly verify. You can also opt to use something else as a citation as well, as there's a good amount of online websites showing Dicks' autograph. It's also possible the Legends The Empire's Finest: Who's Who in the Imperial Military also lists Dicks playing Lennox, given the amount of behind the scenes info in that source, but I would have to check that. In any case, as long as you have one reliable citation, that's all that's needed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:05, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Tyrant's name will need a ref of its own, since it can't be sourced to the film.
  • "The squadron was tasked with locating the new secret headquarters of the Alliance, and after a Viper probe droid[1] launched as part of Project Swarm[4] discovered signs of life on the planet Hoth, Vader had the squadron travel to the Hoth system." I personally think this doesn't flow very well and could be reworded.
  • Paragraphs 2 and 3 of the first section in the Biography can be merged together, the former is just one run-on sentence. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:00, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
    • I've split the run-on sentence, but merging the paragraphs messes with image placement. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:14, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Card Trader card should use {{SWCT}}. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:20, April 7, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:17, April 25, 2020 (UTC)