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Lakra
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 17:58, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: CSWE pulled so much information related to this one out of thin air...
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Support
- Fan26 (Talk) 21:04, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
- Dentface (talk) 21:40, 4 September 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:43, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:19, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 10:37, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
Object
Ayrehead
Is there any way you could work the context of the quotes into the article at all, I'm especially unclear on how the lead quote fits in.Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:26, 18 September 2022 (UTC)- I've subsectioned the body and have changed the previous quote to two others - they're more chronologically appropriate for each of the sections, and I think they should be straightforward enough. Regarding the lead quote, unfortunately I just don't see a satisfactory way to work in the information concerning the quote into the article's body - I've taken caution to extract from the novel all the unique info that is pertinent to the Lakra species as a whole, as opposed to just the mercenary leader, the Lakra mercenaries of the Warlord in general, or the attack on the Warlord's fortress during which the exchange occurs, and I believe that context would be far more appropriate on the corresponding pages instead. As a sort of compromise, I've added just a bit of context to the quote's caption that I hope will explain the quote better. Imperators II(Talk) 16:33, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:37, 29 November 2022 (UTC)