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LUH-989
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:01, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Potentially a THX-1138 reference.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support
- Looks good to me LucaRoR (talk) 17:09, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 01:43, 21 July 2021 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 12:23, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
What, no triangular lakes this time?!!! Imperators II(Talk) 19:16, 30 July 2021 (UTC)- MasterFred(talk) 07:36, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Object
LucaRoR
The picture is too small, is there any way to improve its quality?LucaRoR (talk) 11:21, 29 June 2021 (UTC)- There is not, such are the limitations of early 2000s RTS games. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:52, 29 June 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
My objections to DRN-592 apply here as well.UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:53, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
- Shoulda moved quicker, would have saved you the objection :P Done. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:39, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
Though we have discussed this before, I do think the manufacturer should be removed since B1s appear to have multiple manufacturers in Legends; we don't know which one made LUH-989.UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:07, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
- Removed. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:35, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
After reading through the second paragraph, it occurs to me that half of it isn't really written from LUH-989's perspective. e.g. "One of Shoran's heavy bowcaster troopers walked into the array and was killed by LUH-989's droids." can instead be written as "LUH-989's droids killed one of Shoran's heavy bowcaster troopers who had walked into the array."- Still needs more work. For example, I really don't see the need to specify the number of Wookiees involved, as it has nothing to do with this article. LUH-989 should be the focal point here, not Chewbacca, Shoran, or their Wookiees. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:05, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
- Done. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:52, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
- Still needs more work. For example, I really don't see the need to specify the number of Wookiees involved, as it has nothing to do with this article. LUH-989 should be the focal point here, not Chewbacca, Shoran, or their Wookiees. UberSoldat93
Per Layout Guide, the Equipment section is reserved for external items. As such, the E-5 should be documented there instead of Characteristics.UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:29, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
- All done. Had it in my head that droids didn't get equipment sections for some reason. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:50, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:36, 1 August 2021 (UTC)