Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kwilaan restaurant

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Contents

  • 1 Kwilaan restaurant
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Braha
        • 1.1.2.2 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.3 Imp
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Kwilaan restaurant

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:02, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:39, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  2. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:04, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:06, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
  4. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 17:01, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 19:23, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha
  • The intro appears quite small for my liking. I would like to suggest expanding on what the job is there to beef it up a little bit. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:45, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:26, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • "Signal Interruption is designed to be completed with the playable characters from the Invasion of Theed Adventure Game in the role of the agents hired by Daal, and the first two encounters take place inside the restaurant, using pieces from the roleplaying game." Not entirely sure what "pieces" is referring to and which clause it's related to. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:54, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Clarified Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:01, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
Imp
  • "door pieces"? Is that meant to be "door tokens" or "door miniatures"?
    • Tokens, done
  • "This article follows the description of events provided in scenario." — not sure what info exactly is this sentence supposed to convey, because every article on Wookieepedia is supposed to follow descriptions of events provided in sources where possible. :P Imperators II(Talk) 10:36, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Its meant to acknowledge the sorts of options players can take in a roleplaying scenario, though now I'm struggling to think of a way to reword it Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:02, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
      • Changed to the default phrasing I'm using on RPG articles, see if that works for you. Imperators II(Talk) 07:29, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
        • Looks fine to me Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:52, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:23, 14 June 2022 (UTC)