Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kuuztin

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Contents

  • 1 Kuuztin
    • 1.1 (4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Toprawa
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Kuuztin

  • Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:02, August 21, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Good old TIE Fighter.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:01, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 19:37, September 9, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Nice work. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:52, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 00:17, September 25, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 19:31, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  1. I have a few objections/questions. Firstly, the article mentions an "Imperial probe." Can this be linked to, say, an Imperial probe droid or anything else more specific?
    • The briefing map just shows something marked "probe." It's not in the actual mission so it's unclear whether it's a probe droid, a comm sat or something else. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:14, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
  2. In the very last sentence of the biography, I was a bit unclear on the meaning behind "Thrawn subsequently planned his own trap for Zaarin, using the Missile Boat as bait." Am I correct to take this to mean he was using the Missile Boat starfighter class itself as bait? Can we clarify that at all, perhaps just by saying "using the Missile Boat class as bait"?
    • Clearer? Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:14, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
      • Yes. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:20, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Lastly, I'm a bit confused on the BTS when it says that he appeared in the Star Wars: TIE Fighter Collector's CD-ROM, which I'm to understand is a re-release expansion on the original TIE Fighter. Is that to say he appears only in the expansion and not the original? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:37, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
    • The Collector's CD-ROM included the original game, the Defender of the Empire expansion pack and the previously unreleased Enemies of the Empire campaign. Enemies of the Empire never came out as a separate expansion pack for the original game. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:14, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
      • Change works. Would it not also be appropriate to specify the full "Collector's CD-ROM" in the Appearances section to be uniform with the BTS? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:20, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
        • Good point. Changed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:33, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
          • Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:52, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:31, September 25, 2012 (UTC)