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Kiviett
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:43, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
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Support
- A quite fun read, nice one!—spookywillowwtalk 02:28, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:28, 23 December 2022 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 03:19, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 17:33, 21 January 2023 (UTC) 
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:28, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
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Spooky
It might be nice to have the year established for the Yavin battle, to roughly establish in the article that Kiviett served in that team between that year and the later mentioned 4 ABY date. Or, given the battle is the basis of the calendar system, to somehow note the 4 years as a timeframe.—spookywillowwtalk 01:44, 11 November 2022 (UTC)- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:26, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
Is the ellipsis in the P+T quote per the source?- Appears to be. Rechecked the book directly.
I think the thing about the drums is better suited for the bio than the P+T.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:24, 21 December 2022 (UTC)- Moved. I kept the part in the P&T however, but quite possibly it can be cut from there? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:08, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
- I'd say so, yeah, if you have no issue with it. I also saw you messaged me on Discord, which I'll read closely later today. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:55, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
- Article changed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:51, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
- I'd say so, yeah, if you have no issue with it. I also saw you messaged me on Discord, which I'll read closely later today. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:55, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
- Moved. I kept the part in the P&T however, but quite possibly it can be cut from there? Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:08, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
Uber
The Appearances templates are a bit confusing to follow. 1st and Mo directly contradict each other, and per policy 1st should be only be placed next to the first relevant source in the list. From my understanding of this article, if Kiviett is mentioned by name in The Ewok Defenses, then that needs a 1stm, otherwise it's an Imo. After that, it's a 1st for Imperial Scouting Party.UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:38, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
- Changed appearances templates. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:42, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:28, 22 January 2023 (UTC)