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Karvoss II
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 21:31, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I wonder if the founder of the Matukai was intended as a reference to M'lay Loto.
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- UberSoldat93
(talk) 14:17, August 22, 2020 (UTC) - Fan26 (Talk) 21:32, August 23, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:20, September 21, 2020 (UTC)- Objection handled via IRC Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
MasterFred(talk) 03:34, September 26, 2020 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
The referencing for grid coordinates is inconsistent between the infobox and body. Is this intentional?UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:58, August 22, 2020 (UTC)
- Consistent now. Imperators II(Talk) 14:14, August 22, 2020 (UTC)
Toprawa
Shouldn't Tionne Solusar's mention of the planet in her thing also be mentioned in the History section?- I usually try not to describe mentions of subjects in IU documents if the information in question is already present in the subject's article unless the documents add something new or notable. It just feels like unnecessary repetition of information to me. Imperators II(Talk) 06:10, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- But then I question what is your rationale for including the sentence "At some point following the wedding, Cracken recorded his experience on Karvoss II within a datafile detailing Rebel operatives in an entry dedicated to Loto." That doesn't appear to add anything new or notable. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:51, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- I suppose I had not looked at it that way. Removed. Imperators II(Talk) 18:58, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- Very well. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:20, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- I suppose I had not looked at it that way. Removed. Imperators II(Talk) 18:58, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- But then I question what is your rationale for including the sentence "At some point following the wedding, Cracken recorded his experience on Karvoss II within a datafile detailing Rebel operatives in an entry dedicated to Loto." That doesn't appear to add anything new or notable. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:51, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- I usually try not to describe mentions of subjects in IU documents if the information in question is already present in the subject's article unless the documents add something new or notable. It just feels like unnecessary repetition of information to me. Imperators II(Talk) 06:10, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
The History's quote attribution states that the quote is an "addendum" of Cracken's -- an addendum to what? That should be specified.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:31, September 19, 2020 (UTC)- Specified. Imperators II(Talk) 06:10, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:34, September 26, 2020 (UTC)