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Kalit/Legends

  • Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:19, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:03, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
  2. Fan26 (Talk) 19:47, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:42, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Who knew Jawa politics got so complicated. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:11, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
  5. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 18:16, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • Context for needed for Tatooine in intro and body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Done for intro. In the body, it is later mentioned as a planet. I feel like that's sufficient. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:43, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
      • On second thought, I wrote in the body that Tatooine was the Jawas' homeworld too. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:20, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
  • The Yavin date needs a date note or different formatting as it currently suggests that the NEC states that these things happened to Kalit prior to the battle. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed.
  • Likewise the 4 ABY dates seem like they need a date note. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
  • You currently make it sound like Oola was dropped into the pit as part of R2-D2 and C-3PO arriving. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Factually corrected.
  • I assume you're missing the word member or agent here: "Alliance to Restore the Republic Luke Skywalker" Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed.
  • In the BTS you date two scenes Kalit appeared in but in the body you talk about him appearing in three: the droid's arrival, the Oola/Leia arrival scene, and Luke's arrival scene. You need to specify more clearly which two you're talking about. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
    • He was in the Oola scene and Luke scene. He wasn't (in universe no confirmation to be seen/present) there when Leia arrived, but that happened in between.
      • Rewrote to hopefully make it more clear he was only (confirmed to be) visible/present in the Oola and Luke scenes. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:36, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
        • I think it'd still be a lot clearer if you just said which scene you meant for the first and second scenes in the BTS. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:01, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
  • You say that Kalit was present when the droids arrive in the body, but don't clarify in the BTS how you know that to be the case. How are you identifying Kalit in that scene? By his bandolier? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Factual correction, and sourced his presence in the Oola scene to Who's Who. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:53, 7 July 2022 (UTC)
Fan
  • Intro doesn't explictly mention his gender. Fan26 (Talk) 03:35, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
    • For one, intro mentioning gender isn't a requirement, and for another, mentioned as a king which is a male only position. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:06, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
      • Okay, well you should still pipelink through "his" Fan26 (Talk) 22:55, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Note I suspect that Wittin's tribe using Nebit's help was by 0 BBY, as it doesn't seem likely Nebit survived the sandtrooper attack that year, but I'm not aware of anything confirming Nebit was killed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:00, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:17, 9 September 2022 (UTC)