Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kalist VI

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Kalist VI

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:10, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Previous CAN
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:SWCT, WP:AST

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:00, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:13, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 16:14, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:35, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
5. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:32, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• The planet itself was not known as the dregs of the Deep Core; it was located in the dregs of the Deep Core. And that descriptor isn't from dialogue, so it should not be put in quotes. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:11, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:37, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Please don't forget the fix the intro, as well. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:18, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
      • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:50, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
        • The cause for Kalist's surroundings being known as the dregs of the Deep Core is pure speculation on your part, please amend that.
          • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:03, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
• The mention of humans is infobox-exclusive.
• Please explicitly note in the Description the planet's short name version, correctly referencing both forms.
• Please cut from the intro the unnecessary astrographical details concerning the Interior and the grid square, and instead add a mention of Kalist VI being the homeworld of Dak Ralter. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:30, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:03, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
    • When I say "correctly reference" I mean do not source the full name to the TFA Beginner's Game, which, as can be seen by the infobox image, doesn't use the full name. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:59, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
      • TFABG was a mistake, I fixed the reference. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:47, 8 August 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Please check Ultimate Star Wars, New Edition for a mention of the subject and replace the USW citation if everything is supported. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:04, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:07, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
• Please include the Legends comic's writer and illustrator in the BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:01, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:43, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
    • The Welles Hartley alias needs its own source, simply pipelinking it won't do. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:49, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
      • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:47, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
        • Please take care with what info each ref is covering in the future. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:13, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:02, 13 September 2022 (UTC)