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Jiroch-Saloch
- Nominated by: UberSoldat93
(talk) 15:19, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Companion to Xarcce Huwla, whenever I finish the write-up. Thanks to Imp for assistance.
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Support
Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:47, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 17:00, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:03, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
OOM 224 19:59, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
Object
Macaroni
"Many Duros also settled on both worlds for a time, strongly influencing their architecture." — the "their" here could theoretically refer to either the Duros or the worlds here.I think you should pick one place in the body to mention the Duros and their architecture, not both like you currently have.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:29, 22 September 2022 (UTC)- Done. UberSoldat93
(talk) 17:57, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
- Done. UberSoldat93
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:59, 5 October 2022 (UTC)