Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Janet Lalasha

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Janet Lalasha

• Nominated by: -- —Harrar ^{(Cut the comm chatter)} 13:54, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Please don't stop the music.

(5 ACs/3 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:16, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
2. Graestan^(Talk) 00:17, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
3. --Eyrezer 03:04, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
4. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 03:17, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
5. La, la, la... --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:49, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
6. From the golden age of SW canon. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:51, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
7. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:44, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
8. As if it's necessary for me to add this vote. :P Good job. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 19:32, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Attack of the Clone
   • Same "in order that" problem as with Brullian Dyll; the phrase isn't grammatically correct and doesn't flow well.
     • Same lack of an excuse...reworded.
   • Understand the tagline this time, but hate the reference. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:22, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
     • I was digging deep for music references here. -- —Harrar ^{(Cut the comm chatter)} 23:01, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• CUSWE says she was a Fizz player. I presume this is incorrect on its part. --Eyrezer 03:04, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Ouch. I think I rushed these articles a bit. Empire Blues says "[Doikk Na'ts] plays the Fizzz as well as Janet Lalasha ever did." Well at least you spotted it! I've referred to it as the Dorenian Beshniquel in this article. -- —Harrar ^{(Cut the comm chatter)} 09:46, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
    • Cool. I'm glad to have helped, and I take back my slur on the CUSWE :D --Eyrezer 08:18, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
• I've changed the infobox's reference to the "Dark Times" to simply "reign of the Galactic Empire," for clarity and since I'm not sure "Dark Times" is an actual official time period, if you understand my meaning. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:51, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Sure thing, sounds like a good change. And I know what you mean about the "Golden Age"; I love The Last One Standing so much because of the mixture of in-universe and OOU nostalgia! Thanks for all the speedy reviews guys. -- —Harrar ^{(Cut the comm chatter)} 22:30, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:07, 13 July 2009 (UTC)