Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jadonna Veloz

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Jadonna Veloz

  • Nominated by: Jinzler (talk) 21:20, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first nomination in quite a while!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Thanks for the quick response - everything looks good to me now. Nice work. ProfessorTofty (talk) 19:43, January 31, 2018 (UTC)
  2. Looks good!—Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 12:34, February 16, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:23, February 19, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 00:35, February 20, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 21:35, February 21, 2018 (UTC)

Object

ProfessorTofty
  • The manual of style says that anything that's mentioned in a quote has to be linked within the quote if it can't be linked elsewhere in the article. So "bacta" would have to be linked, but I'll leave it to you as to whether or not you want to try to work it into the article. ProfessorTofty (talk) 15:08, January 25, 2018 (UTC)
    • I have now added a link in the article body to this. Jinzler (talk) 10:58, January 27, 2018 (UTC)
  • Is "Beldon" normally capitalized within the source material outside of the start of a sentence? Because you have it capitalized within the article at least twice, for example, "the ship passed a Beldon," but not within the quotation. ProfessorTofty (talk) 15:08, January 25, 2018 (UTC)
    • You are 100% right, it should be lowercase - I have now fixed this. Jinzler (talk) 10:58, January 27, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Does the source use the term "light-stock freighter"? Because I can only ever recall the term "stock-light freighter" being a thing.
    • This is an oversight on my part - this was a term used in the article from before I wrote it up and from further review of the source I have noted that it is never clarified what type of vessel the Wayward Girl is. I have now changed "freighter" to "starship". I have re-reviewed the rest of the article against the source and have noted no further such errors as having slipped through. Jinzler (talk) 20:23, February 19, 2018 (UTC)
  • The date reference should do a better job of manually explaining how you're arriving at c. 2 BBY exactly. I started it off for you to explain that ERC dates Rebel Dawn to that date range. Now you should explain that the story's events involving Veloz take place early in the story, therefore corresponding to 2 BBY, etc. etc. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:37, February 17, 2018 (UTC)
    • I have now had a go at improving this. Thanks for your review. Jinzler (talk) 20:23, February 19, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:35, February 21, 2018 (UTC)