Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ish-Bel Tur

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Ish-Bel Tur

  • Nominated by: Jinzler (talk) 08:31, January 29, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Jedi

(5 ACs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote I'm putting "Tur's lightsaber was later seized as a trophy by the Force-sensitive wampa Ku-Kak" on a t-shirt. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:40, February 2, 2018 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Next movie idea. "Force Sensitive Wampa's: A Star Wars Story". Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:45, February 2, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 16:24, February 4, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:18, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
  5. —Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 20:35, February 12, 2018 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 22:31, February 12, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • Before proceeding into the article body, I'd like to see some subsectioning there. Two would probably be about right. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:41, January 31, 2018 (UTC)
    • Thanks - now added Jinzler (talk) 06:13, January 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • Well done. Just one thing. Although it's not technically mandatory at this point, we strongly recommend referencing the BTS in full. It's become a de facto requirement, which will likely be made full policy sooner than later, thus requiring you to go back and do it anyways. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 08:38, January 31, 2018 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the heads-up, it is now sourced. Jinzler (talk) 06:23, February 2, 2018 (UTC)
  • I also noticed in "Thaere Is Not Your Friend" that "Eye on Cularin" is placed in quotes rather than italicized. Please check to see which one it should be. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 08:46, January 31, 2018 (UTC)
    • The Wizards.com articles consistently use quotes whereas in CSWE it is italicized. I have now changed this to use quotes. Thanks for your review. Jinzler (talk) 06:23, February 2, 2018 (UTC)
Imperators
  • Just want to check: in the article, you identify Mischa Vorfren as a Chev, but our article for Vorfren states he is Anzati instead. Is Vorfren's article in error, and, if so, could you fix it?
    • You are right, I got him mixed up with a trio of Chev Force Adepts who also served Phylus Mon. I have now corrected the article accordingly. Jinzler (talk) 07:27, February 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • In "Legacy," you use "her" to refer to Vorfren, but in BTS you use "him." Imperators II(Talk) 15:01, February 11, 2018 (UTC)
    • Fixed - Vorfren is male Jinzler (talk) 07:27, February 12, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:31, February 12, 2018 (UTC)