Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ibbe

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Ibbe

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Support

  1. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 11:34, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 23:48, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • "Bodies of water could be found on Ibbe" — you're already noting streams several times before this so it's kinda redundant. If you mean contained bodies of water such as oceans/seas/lakes that should be made clearer. Imperators II(Talk) 18:52, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
    • I was referring to the pond that Vern yeets a lomba lizard into, fixed Sanathestarr (talk) 07:34, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • "Distant from important galactic events, it was obscure, and few were aware of its existence. The planet was seen by Tanabi Yar, a Togruta pirate and member of the Shili royal family, as a good place to process tragedies and heal[1] and as an escape from sadness by the Jedi Knight Vernestra Rwoh."—elements of this should be worked into the History, but doesn't fit under Description as that's only for physical aspects and not for opinions and time-based stuff (it was distant from events at that point, but we don't know if that's permanent.) Most of this can just be moved cleanly to the first paragraph of the History luckily though.—spookywillowwtalk 18:52, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
  • "uncomfortably" should be trimmed out of the Description, as it's an opinion-word. It could be described that it's "extremely" humid or any other synonym, or the 'uncomfortable' opinion could be moved to the body; or trimmed entirely, up to you.
  • In the same vein, "poor" should be moved into the History from Locations to properly denote that it was poor [by the time Rwoh was there].
  • "Balmy" could be added to the climate infobox field and pipelinked to Temperature. Though humid can often colliqually mean temperature as well, it is technically only referring to the amount of water vapor in the air by definition. To that point, the temperature being warm/balmy should be mentioned in the Description somewhere too.
  • Added Sanathestarr (talk) 19:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
  • "Once it was finished, the sun would come out and…"—is enough to confirm the existence of Ibbe having a sun, which should be made, then infoboxed and included in the Description.
    • If I may, if that's the extent of info we get on it it's probably not article-worthy. But yeah, should still be noted in Description and infobox. Imperators II(Talk) 06:55, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Added the sun mention to both infobox and description, but I pipelinked it to Star because like Imp, I don't think that it is necessarily worthy of having its own article Sanathestarr (talk) 19:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Description has "Ponds could also be found on Ibbe" though infobox has "A pond." A skim of the chapter seems to only indicate one pond, in which case Description should technically state "At least one pond could also be found on Ibbe" instead, or if there was a second I missed, then the infobox would be "Ponds"
    • Yeah that was a mistake in the description, fixed Sanathestarr (talk) 19:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Double reference in the beginning of the Description.
  • "Yar recommended that Jedi Knight Vernestra Rwoh…—wasn't she a Wayseeker by then?
    • The two titles aren't mutually exclusive :P yeah, technically (in her words) she went off to play Wayseeker, but afaik she was never officially declared one (wasn't the rank also kinda phased out after phase 1 anyway? so I doubt she actually held the rank) Sanathestarr (talk) 19:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
  • The biggest thing here—Ibbe is also mentioned in several chapters after the departure (8, 12, 13, 24, 31, 33, 39) off a text-search, possibly more in unnamed circumstances. Of course, not all of these should be documented. However, 2-3 sentences briefly going "Rwoh thought about her time Ibbe, including…" Some specific things of note she does attribute to the planet itself are becoming proficient with her lightwhip and such, and especially when it's mentioned in a quote. Again, not all of them because that would be too play-by-play, but it also shouldn't end off the moment she leaves.
    • I did actually take a look at those, and I feel like most of these do not need to be mentioned because they're not relevant to Ibbe, but taking another look you are right that there is one or two that should be noted. Done Sanathestarr (talk) 19:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Even if it's just a quote of Vern and Avon's conversation when the reunite, or the Ibbe mentions in quotes from chapters 12 or 39 that aren't documented elsewhere, there should be a quote added for "Avon Starros' visit" section.—spookywillowwtalk 01:02, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
    • yeah I wasn't sure whether a quote would belong there if it doesn't directly mention Ibbe, but if just a quote from their meeting works, there's definitely possible ones. Does the current one work? Sanathestarr (talk) 19:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • I really dislike having to use the 228 BBY date for Defy the Storm stuff, but unfortunately the debate on this is still ongoing so I'll have to go with the precedent. (for context or if anyone has any thoughts on the matter, see here) Sanathestarr (talk) 20:14, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
  • I took the tree image from you so I'm obliged to tell you this you could alternatively re-section History into two subsections of two paragraphs each - the first one describing the various pre-Starros visitors to Ibbe, and the second one focusing on the day of Starros' arrival and Rwoh's departure. AND THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IS that would allow you to elegantly squeeze in another image of, say, Starros. :P Imperators II(Talk) 18:18, 10 April 2024 (UTC)