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IX3244-B
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:11, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
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JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:51, 5 December 2022 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 20:14, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 19:11, 10 January 2023 (UTC) 
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:06, 15 January 2023 (UTC)- BloodOfIrizi (talk) 02:31, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
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NAKIRRE-B
It seems like you're missing a description section.Samonic (Talk) 13:21, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
- My thought was that it can be adequately covered in one of the preexisting sections, which is in this case history. I can rearrange the article if viewed as needed though. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:23, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
- It's in here. I think the LG's directives are mandatory. Samonic (Talk) 15:09, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
- Sectioned. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:51, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
- It's in here. I think the LG's directives are mandatory. Samonic
- My thought was that it can be adequately covered in one of the preexisting sections, which is in this case history. I can rearrange the article if viewed as needed though. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:23, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
I don't think mentioning GG5 in the bts really adds anything.It makes sense why you're saying that FF11 is in error, but can you make it a little clearer why we know ISWU is right?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:57, 1 December 2022 (UTC)- Reworded to address the second objection, and to make it more clear why I added "Imperial Scouting Party," as The Illustrated Star Wars Universe seemed to directly establish Jhorn wasn't present during the events in the former story. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:23, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
- Still a little confused - was Jhorn in IX3244-B in the GG5 story? And ISWU established that to be in error? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:53, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
- Not sure if maybe I should reword the article, but Jhorn wasn't created for the earlier story. In the second book mentioned, Jhorn was first mentioned, and talked about the events in the first story which he was not present for. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:58, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
- Just to make sure I have the chronology right: 1) GG5 comes out with new events about IX3244-B, with Jhorn not being there for said events, 2) ISWU says that Jhorn did some stuff after the events of GG5's story, and 3) FF11 erroneously says Jhorn was there for GG5's events? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:16, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
- Correct. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:47, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
- Just to make sure I have the chronology right: 1) GG5 comes out with new events about IX3244-B, with Jhorn not being there for said events, 2) ISWU says that Jhorn did some stuff after the events of GG5's story, and 3) FF11 erroneously says Jhorn was there for GG5's events? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:16, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
- Not sure if maybe I should reword the article, but Jhorn wasn't created for the earlier story. In the second book mentioned, Jhorn was first mentioned, and talked about the events in the first story which he was not present for. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:58, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
- Still a little confused - was Jhorn in IX3244-B in the GG5 story? And ISWU established that to be in error? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:53, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
- Reworded to address the second objection, and to make it more clear why I added "Imperial Scouting Party," as The Illustrated Star Wars Universe seemed to directly establish Jhorn wasn't present during the events in the former story. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:23, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
Please include a Commanders and crew section per Layout Guide.Intro mentions "various creatures," but this terminology is not present in the body.UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:51, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed both. Hopefully what I wrote was alright for the second part with rewording. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:38, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
- Commanders and crew goes below History. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:14, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:45, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Commanders and crew goes below History. UberSoldat93
- Addressed both. Hopefully what I wrote was alright for the second part with rewording. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:38, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
I just noticed that the article is in Category:Imperial military units yet this is not reflected in the infobox or body.UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:55, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:36, 15 January 2023 (UTC)