Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hem Dazon

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Hem Dazon

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:15, October 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Felt like a break from Galaxy's Edge for some old school cantina goodness

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Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:24, October 13, 2020 (UTC)
  2. LordMominutiae (talk) 01:21, October 17, 2020 (UTC)
  3. My vote is redundant, but I'll be polite :P Zed42 (talk) 23:53, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:41, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 06:15, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:17, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:27, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

Zed
  • P&T mentions his skin color twice.
  • The long list of authors for Absolutely Everything You Need to Know can be removed. Zed42 (talk) 10:43, October 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • His gender should be explicitly mentioned somewhere in the body. Zed42 (talk) 18:13, October 13, 2020 (UTC)
Imp
  • I realize the "which includes" in "the events of Star Wars: Episode IV A New Hope prior to the Battle of Yavin, which includes Hem Dazon's appearance, to 0 BBY" refers to ANH, not the Battle of Yavin, but is there any way for you to reword this so that there's no grammatical ambiguity? Imperators II(Talk) 19:23, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Re-worded, how does it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:18, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Eh, the grammatical ambiguity is kind of still there ("events [...] which include(s) Hem Dazon's appearance [...]" vs "ANH, which include(s) Hem Dazon's appearance [...]") but I'm hoping the change "includes" -> "include" solves this adequately.
  • Uh, I'm not really seeing the benefit of having different sourcing for infobox and the body. Imperators II(Talk) 09:19, 26 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:27, 28 January 2021 (UTC)