Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Haash'n

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Haash'n

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:08, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First Mon Calamari nom, take two.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Reviewing this made me discover that Dressellians were part of the Home One briefing. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 14:48, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
2. Liverpool92 21:08, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:57, 5 June 2021 (UTC)
4. LucaRoR (talk) 10:53, 22 June 2021 (UTC)
5. Tommy-Macaroni 17:21, 26 June 2021 (UTC)
6. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:02, 26 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Major is intro-exclusive.
• In reply to your reply on the CAN page, that is not the order in which the Alliance leaders spoke.
  • Feel free to call me an idiot on that one :P.
    • This objection and the one about Humans below just goes to show how obsessed with Mon Calamari you are :P
• I don't see how the context for Home One being Ackbar's flagship is necessary.
• You should also mention that Humans, not just Mon Calamari, stood behind the Alliance leaders. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 23:18, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
  • All others should be done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:26, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
• Linking: Galactic Emperor/Legends should be used instead of Emperor/Legends, and missing links for Admiral Ackbar.
• Flagship, Alliance Fleet are infobox/intro-exclusive, and Alliance High Command/Legends link is intro-exclusive.
• You should replace the infobox image with a higher quality one by cropping the image in the article body. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 23:39, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed links, the Ackbar one was left from when I removed the bit about it being his flagship. If the image is still not to your liking, let me know so I can ask someone else to help me with it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:47, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
• CSWE only says Haash'n's homeworld was subjugated. I think saying that Dac was his homeworld is a reasonable assumption, but the name "Dac" need another reference note. Also, one's homeworld is not necessarily one's place of birth.
  • Updated the refs.
    • The ref note doesn't say that Dac was a planet, or that Haash'n was born on his homeworld, yet it's used to cite "Haash'n was born on the […] planet Dac." As I said earlier, one's homeworld is not necessarily one's place of birth. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 07:56, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed.
• The card doesn't say that Haash'n was part of the Alliance Fleet.
  • I think that it's reasonable to assume that seeing as it says he piloted Star Cruisers, he was affiliated with the fleet of those cruisers. I also think it's reasonable to assume that the Star Cruisers it discusses are of the Rebel fleet. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:57, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Alright, then Haash'n's affiliation to the Alliance Fleet is infobox-exclusive info. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 07:56, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
      • Addresed via Discord. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:29, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
• You could probably shorten the article body by ten, twenty words, which would bring the body's word count below 165. This means the introduction should be removed, and the behind the scenes would not be counted as part of the word count. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 07:54, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Hanzo

• I feel like his dream of piloting starships & goal of piloting Star Cruisers should just be in personality and traits. As is, you pretty much repeated the dream in both biography & personality and traits section. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:26, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Also, I can't promise an AC won't want me to move the species and gender info back. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:29, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
• Please specify in the intro that he was on Home One during the Endor battle. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:51, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:58, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Can you specify that Haash'n served the Alliance as a major instead of introducing his rank with no context in the body?
  • Done.
• Isn't an individual holding the rank of major an officer to begin with? If so, it's redundant to say he served as an officer after introducing his rank.
  • Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:36, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
• Reviewing note: Species comes before gender.
• Reviewing note: Please spell out the full name of a character instead of just the last name on the first linking instance. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:51, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
• WhatLinksHere shows me a source not listed here, The Rebel Alliance Scrapbook. You also need to investigate all sources that depict Home One's interior for any pictures of the character. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:59, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Added, and found one more {{Po}}. I've checked the sources list of several status articles on the Home One in VI, and the only other thing that I need to check is Behind the Magic. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:58, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Finished checking Walex's, Mothma's, and Home One's {{Po}}s. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:48, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:03, 26 June 2021 (UTC)

• I will be away for the next two weeks and therefore not he able to address objections; feel free to list them, but I'm asking the AgriCorps not to take down this nom. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:50, 21 June 2021 (UTC)