Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gold Wing

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Gold Wing

• Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 01:10, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: From the studio that brought you Green Wing and Blue Wing.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Ok with me. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:17, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:02, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
3. Stuff related to the films is always nice. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:30, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
4. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 00:03, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
5. Excellent. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 00:01, October 4, 2010 (UTC)

Object

• Is the P&T section really neccessary? It's only redundant info which has nothing to do with his personality. Otherwise nice. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:00, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
  • I really don't see anything wrong with including one. It's never been much of an issue in the past. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 14:13, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Toprawa

• I'm guessing the intro quote is meant to mirror that of the film. If so, would it not be better to use the film quote? Since they are not exactly identical, and since the film is higher on the canon hierarchy than the novel, the film quote should be preferable.
  • I figured the quote from the novel would be more appropriate for this article, since Gold Wing is not present in the movie. I can still change the quote, if you'd prefer.
• I feel like one more sentence mentioning the success of Calrissian and Antilles in destroying the Death Star would help round out the end of the bio.
  • Done.
• Good job, but be careful of getting semicolon happy. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:51, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  • Admittedly, I've been using a lot of semicolons recently. :p Thanks for the review, and thanks again for helping me check those sources. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 11:20, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Green Tentacle

• The P&T really isn't very P&T related. Could you not say something like "The pilot followed Calrissian and Wedge Antilles into the second Death Star's superstructure, and was skilled enough to navigate through the hazardous superstructure, only to be shot down by an Imperial TIE fighter before reaching the main reactor." At least then it says something about him rather than just repeating biography. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:00, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks for the review, GT. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:00, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:20, October 4, 2010 (UTC)