Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ghest

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Ghest

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:32, June 29, 2016 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I swear I've done this before...

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Looks good to me - I don't see anything that appears to be missing or anything that is unclear. Made a minor edit to link something, but that was it. ProfessorTofty (talk) 20:24, July 2, 2016 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 00:37, August 15, 2016 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 03:26, August 15, 2016 (UTC)
4. AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:37, August 15, 2016 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:30, August 19, 2016 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (talk) 17:56, August 20, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II

• "Carnivorous predator" (Behavior section) seems redundant.
  • Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:09, August 7, 2016 (UTC)
• Was "starred" in the first paragraph of the Ghest in the galaxy section meant to be "stared"? Imperators II^(Talk) 04:57, July 27, 2016 (UTC)
  • Yup. Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:09, August 7, 2016 (UTC)

Toprawa

• I'm afraid you've misapplied the "Ghests in the galaxy" section. This section is specifically for the species' history away from their homeworld. In this case, it seems all of this information is taking place on Rodia, so it should all be simply incorporated into the History section. I would recommend just turning that section header into a subsection of History.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:20, August 19, 2016 (UTC)
• The article body never really outwardly introduces the fact that Huulik is a Jedi Knight like the intro does. You should incorporate this into Huulik's first mention. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:44, August 18, 2016 (UTC)
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:20, August 19, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:08, August 20, 2016 (UTC)