Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Garrthinius

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Garrthinius

• Nominated by: Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 13:13, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I sat down to do a CAN, tripped, and did a GAN. Why does this keep happening to me? This little guy is from pp. 146-147 of The Truce at Bakura Sourcebook.
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

(Votes required: No additional votes required to pass, please consider reviewing another article.)

Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:18, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
2. Noice BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:56, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
3. I hope you don't mind that I changed the grid coordinates note to make it consistent :) LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:17, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:13, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:07, 22 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Ziara

• i believe the introduction could be expanded, especially with the contents of the infobox.
• the revolutionary groups could use a page, they seem notable enough
• Essential Atlas missing from sources
• is the Imperial Garrison not relevant to the history? seems like the relevant story should be there BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:32, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
  • How's that? Am I allowed to just get rid of the Locations subheading entirely? Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 02:50, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Nice! but the locations section still needs to be there, i believe. It just has to mention the locations, not the associated history. see Uba IV for an example
      • Oh, thank you for the example! That makes it much clearer. How's that for the intro, as well? I'm not sure if I have to indicate somehow that that last sentence is from the RPG scenario. Dropbearemma (she/her) 04:31, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
        • er, tbh i'm not quite sure. Not too familiar with this RPG stuff haha. I'll strike my objections and hopefully someone more experienced can shed some light. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:15, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
    • re: intro — a brief summary of the history should also be added. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:42, 29 November 2022 (UTC)

Spooky

• Spied mention of the planet's population in the article, would that + whatever else info be suitable for an Inhabitants section?—spookywilloww^talk 04:03, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Hmm. I made an attempt? How dare this article be long enough for me to section it. Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 02:50, 21 November 2022 (UTC)

Lord Samonic

• Please link and contextualize Tyric when you first mention them. Their context shall be removed from "Inhabitants" after you address this objection. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:37, 20 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Oops. How's that? Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 02:50, 21 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:07, 22 December 2022 (UTC)