Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gadin Badolfa

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Gadin Badolfa

  • Nominated by: —Axinal Convocation Chamber 23:04, March 3, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Hate to have two pending GANs at once, but this was a little too long for CA.

(5 ACs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Hooray for Sentinel! Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:36, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Jinzler 20:49, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 18:05, March 5, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Hot damn, you're good. Graestan(Talk) 21:57, March 5, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Very nice job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:22, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Going for a snowball? 1358 (Talk) 17:56, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
  7. ACvote No JangFett (Talk) 17:57, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Jujiggum
  • Plenty of info to warrant a P&T: his architectural abilities, the fact that he earned respect from the upper echelons of the Tribe despite not being a Sith himself, the fact that he was in close contact with many of the Tribe's High Lords, the fact that he agreed to help Orielle and even informed her of the Luzo brothers' promotion, etc. As a note: please watch your grammar, I fixed several minor things in my copy-edit. Otherwise, nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:41, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
    • Added P&T section. I appreciate the copy-edit, though I must take issue with the grammatical errors you mentioned. Aside from the present tense in the BTS, I saw no real flaws in my grammar, in which I usually take great care. Still, the copy-edit was helpful. Thank you for that and for the review. —Axinal Convocation Chamber 20:17, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
      • My apologies, I wasn't very clear. They weren't grammar mistakes so much as awkward wording: for one example, calling him a "much-demanded and respected individual" read somewhat poorly. So I guess I meant wording, and not grammar. Sounds like I need to watch my wording, too. :P Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:36, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
        • Ah, I see. Well thank you again for the reviews, two copy-edits, suggested expansions, and finally, your support. :D —Axinal Convocation Chamber 20:38, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I'd like to see a brief expansion on the intro. It doesn't have to be much, but it currently doesn't really give us any sense of his biography material (i.e., what exactly he does in canon).
    • Added one sentence; doesn't expand it a whole lot, but see what you think.
  • This is kind of nitpicky, but I'd prefer if the article went ahead and sourced the first sentence of the BTS. Although it is self-sourcing, it currently seems like it's being referenced to the Facebook page, which isn't exactly correct, as far as I can see. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:08, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:57, March 6, 2011 (UTC)