Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Freedom's Run

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

Freedom's Run

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:58, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
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Support

1. Love me an MC80. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:10, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
2. Run for it! :P Nicely done. — Samonic 21:34, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• I don't think we need another source to say it's a "Star Cruiser" since you already established that it is an "MC80 Star Cruiser."
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:14, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
• It would be nice if you specified that the GCW was fought against the Empire already in the first sentence of History.
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:14, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
• Rather than: "Shortly prior to the attack on the Outer Rim's Moddell sector moon Endor[2] in 4 ABY,[4] against the Galactic Empire" what would you say about something like: "Shortly prior to the Battle of Endor, a moon in the Outer Rim Territories,[2] fought in 4 ABY[4] against the Galactic Empire, […]"
  • Reworded --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:14, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
• I don't understand how the last sentence in "History" is relevant to the article's subject.
  • Removed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:14, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
• Maybe an image of Ackbar would fit in the body. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:51, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Would an image of the Battle of Endor work? --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:14, 4 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I guess so :) LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:33, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Added! --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:27, 5 May 2022 (UTC)

Samonic's Run for it

• Rebel Alliance Navy should be present in the intro.— Samonic 18:36, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:13, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• The extra information about Rebel Files being buried and excavated isn't really relevant here since there are no additional notes from the Resistance (e.g. Zorbia). Removing the information will bring the body below 165 words. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:52, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
  • In that case let's remove the nomination and I'll nom it for CA, thanks. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:25, 30 May 2022 (UTC)

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