Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Formidable

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Formidable

• Nominated by: UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:56, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Figured I'd get this off the ground since I have one more free slot.

(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Tommy Macaroni 14:42, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:51, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 13:00, February 20, 2020 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:24, February 22, 2020 (UTC)
5. MasterFredcerique 18:38, February 22, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Ben

• Is there not any quotes that even indirectly mention the formidable that you could use? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 09:14, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • There is one that references the Formidable's destruction but I don't know if that would fit being at the top of the page. UberSoldat93 (talk)
    • Ok I added some quotes and an image now. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:35, February 17, 2020 (UTC)

Tommy

• It's generally frowned upon having one sentence paragraphs (outside the BTS). I recommend breaking up the first history paragraph.
  • Broke it up and moved some info from the second paragraph. Does it look better now? UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• General underlinking: e.g. Sexes, Star Destroyer.
  • Added both links. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• I think you should mention the command tower was completely severed.
  • Done. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• Do we see the ship deploy TIEs? If so, they should be added to the infobox and description. If not, the history needs rewording.
  • Vader's orders the officer aboard the vessel to "scramble all fighters," so I believe it's safe to assume they are deployed from there. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Okay, then please add that info to the infobox and description. Also, that quote could be nice for the description. Tommy Macaroni 12:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• "the Formidable was destroyed when a combined group of bot-drones, remote-controlled by the slicer Chio Fain, that the bounty hunters acquired from the arms dealer Wef" I don't think this flows very well, please rephrase.
  • Does it flow better now? UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• I recommend swapping the quotes, as the latter is far more informative on the ship itself.
  • Swapped. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• Please try to replace the main image with a higher quality one. I got it from an... unofficial... source so I'm sure you can get it better, as the body one is very nice.
  • Done. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• "--" needs replacing with an em dash. Tommy Macaroni 10:31, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)
• Is the second sentence of the first quote missing punctuation?
• Again, I would like context for the bot-drones.
• If the Imperial captain has dialogue, I would like to see an article for him. Tommy Macaroni 12:46, February 17, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:38, February 22, 2020 (UTC)