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Flight Simulator Squadron

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 21:45, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Star Wars Kinect vibes
  • Date Archived: 05:44, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 456 words (73 introduction, 284 body, 99 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 401 words (62 introduction, 247 body, 92 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Resistance

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. CometSmudge (talk) 22:36, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
  2. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:29, 3 October 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 01:13, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote I love the silly expressions in this article's images —spookywillowwtalk 01:31, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:41, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

Object

DFaceG
  • I don't rightly recall if there are more quotes outright describing the game, but there's some dialogue from the characters (exclamations or taunting, what have you) that would work for quotes on the article. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:40, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
    • How's that? Wok142 (talk) 22:49, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
Comet
  • The intro says she owned a version of the game, but quotes/body indicate she owned all three versions
  • Template:Game would probably be better here instead of Device
  • The link to sentience is intro-exclusive, but it might be better to just re-word the intro to remove it instead of fitting it into the body since it seems unnecessary to me. CometSmudge (talk) 18:55, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed all. Wok142 (talk) 19:31, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Is there a reason the BTS image isn't in the body instead? CometSmudge (talk) 20:18, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
    • I guess I thought to put it there since I got it from sw.com, but it's just a still from the episode so I can move it. I'm working on getting another image in there as well. Wok142 (talk) 21:29, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
      • Ok moved that image and got another one in there as well. Wok142 (talk) 21:38, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • I think the intro should briefly mentioned the time Torra and Kaz played it Lewisr (talk) 16:21, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Think it would be worth noting that her room was in Doza Tower when you first introduce mention of her room, otherwise it might not be immediately clear why Torra would invite Kaz to the tower to play Lewisr (talk) 16:21, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
  • BTS should note that it was also identified in the episode Lewisr (talk) 16:21, 4 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed all. Wok142 (talk) 17:15, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:41, 7 October 2024 (UTC)