Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Evax

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Evax

  • Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:08, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Couldn't think of a creative comment for this one. I know, you're all devastated. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:08, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

(6 ACs/2 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. One note: his image and Imperial xenophobia is enough to state that he's Human. Otherwise, nice job. MauserComlink 03:14, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
    • Sadly, it isn't. I talked to Toprawa about this a few days ago, and he agrees that there is not enough info to call him Human. I've reverted your edit; if you wish to remove your vote, feel free to. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 12:19, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
  2. JangFett Talk 14:09, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:54, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Nice n' clean. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 19:32, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grunny (Talk) 01:04, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
  6. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 03:07, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 03:24, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
  8. ACvote For the record, I think this nom is poor and the nominator is even worse. :P Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:49, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
    • XD JangFett Talk 16:11, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Hey Tranner, possibly you can add on to this short sentence: "Evax perished in the explosion." Maybe mention that everyone onboard, including Evax, perished in the explosion. Other than that, great work man :) JangFett Talk 06:28, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
    • There are two reasons why I did not do that: Sourcing that would be an unnecessary pain, and there's always a possibility that some people made it off the station. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 12:19, 15 August 2009 (UTC)
      • I see what you mean.

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:01, 16 August 2009 (UTC)


  • I've removed the context provided for Imperial Intelligence in the intro, since it was pretty redundant and unnecessary. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:54, 15 August 2009 (UTC)