Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Eno Arba

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Eno Arba

• Nominated by: Zackson224 (talk) 18:09, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Video Games

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Great work! Dentface (talk) 07:39, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
2. Hope to see more like this! JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:54, 28 December 2022 (UTC)
3. Marvelous work! BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:07, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
4. Per the above. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:58, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
5. I look forward to more from you! OOM 224 14:14, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ziara

• (review note) - Welcome to GAN!
• context needed for Ghintee, Slim, and Rozatta in the intro
  • Added. Zackson224 (talk) 21:48, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
• does the source identify Ando as Arba's homeworld? if its not stated outright it should be removed
  • Yes it does. (Proof shown on Discord) Zackson224 (talk) 21:48, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
• context for the station, saying it was in the Outer rim should suffice
  • Added. I think wording could be better but don't know what to say. Zackson224 (talk) 21:48, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
• only the release year is necessary in the BTS, not the whole date.
  • Done. Zackson224 (talk) 21:48, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
• made some slight changes here, take a look BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:51, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Is there a reason for converting the numbers into their word equivalent? Zackson224 (talk) 21:49, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
• can arba's "association" with Meeko and Margo be expanded? maybe something about how they knew each other?
  • Arba's bounty profile gives no context about their relationship, merely stating "Known Affiliates: Magro Slim, Meeko Ghintee". Zackson224 (talk) 00:21, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
• add a quote in the biography and the P+t, if available
  • Only quote available is mentioned at the top of the article. Zackson224 (talk) 00:21, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
• add an image in the biography. I'd reccomend an image of Jango. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:42, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. Zackson224 (talk) 00:21, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
• mentioned on Discord but saying it here again in case you didnt see it: the source said Eno would engage Fett in combat, so a "Skills and abilities" section could be added stating that Eno was capable in combat BloodOfIrizi (talk) 02:23, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Added the skill and abilities section. Zackson224 (talk) 15:32, 27 December 2022 (UTC)

Dent

• Hi there! The page should link to a disambiguation page for the name "Eno." Eno Cordova and Elizabeth A. D. Eno exist, for example. You would have to create this disambiguation page and link it using the {{Youmay}} template. See Bix for an example of a disambiguation page and Bix Caleen for how to link to one using Youmay. Great work on your first GAN! :) Dentface (talk) 00:32, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Added disambiguation. Zackson224 (talk) 01:00, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
• The skin color in the infobox and the one in the body do not match. Please correct. Thank you! Dentface (talk) 00:36, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Corrected. Zackson224 (talk) 01:00, 26 December 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Very nice work here, just two things from me: I don't think it's really relevant to Arba's personality that he was an affiliate of Ghintee.
  • Done. Zackson224 (talk) 15:29, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
• Usually video games have their release year listed as a copyright year somewhere, is that not the case here?
  • Adding an unneeded reference is just a mistake on my part. It is now removed. Zackson224 (talk) 15:29, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
• Review note: here's my copy-edit, it's mostly minor grammar things. Let me know if I changed something I shouldn't have or if you have any questions on it. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:52, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Many other pages about Aqualish (both Legends and Canon) include the gender first and then the species, however a few have the species first and then the gender. Does it matter what order they go in? Zackson224 (talk) 15:29, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Most sources in general will go species and then gender, so that's the general precedent here as well. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:54, 28 December 2022 (UTC)
      • Thanks. Zackson224 (talk) 15:07, 28 December 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Infobox-exclusive homeworld. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:04, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. Zackson224 (talk) 19:23, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

OOM

• Good work! Just one thing: the species does not need to be repeated between the Biography and the Personality and traits sections. Mentioning it in either one, whichever you think is best, suffices. OOM 224 10:28, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Removed the species from Personality and traits. Zackson224 (talk) 12:06, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

1. FYI, this page qualifies for WookieeProject: Video Games. :) Dentface (talk) 07:39, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
   1. Added. Zackson224 (talk) 12:47, 26 December 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:14, 15 January 2023 (UTC)