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Elzian

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Support

  1. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:09, October 15, 2020 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:38, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
  3. Zed42 (talk) 21:31, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Tommy-Macaroni 12:50, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:13, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • Ref 2 shouldn't reference the whole Expansion Pack like that. Please implement {{Armada}} with a link to a specific card, or use a different source entirely.
  • This MC80 sounds like it should have an article of its own. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:54, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Per objection here, the Dark Horse Comics link should be replaced by the equivalent Marvel.com page.
    • Sorry to interject here, but I did not make the same objection on this nomination due to the relevant Marvel.com entry not containing the same info as the Dark Horse one, i.e., the artists. Imperators II(Talk) 20:09, October 16, 2020 (UTC)
  • It would be better to state the species in Personality and traits rather than repeat the information between that section and the Biography. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:05, October 16, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • I don't think the last part of the Biography about the interruption to Solo's rest is really relevant to Elzian.
    • Elzian was given command, then something happened that interrupted Han's rest. I think it's notable enough, but I've trimmed down the paragraph a bit. - - -CIS roundel OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 20:39, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • What is relevant, however, is the next issue's confirmation of the New Republic victory. Zed42 (talk) 20:12, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • How exactly do we know Elzian's gender? I'm not seeing anything in the comic that mentions it. Zed42 (talk) 18:40, September 27, 2020 (UTC)
    • Huh, it was an assumption based on species such as Rodians, Quarren, and Mon Calamari. Removed/reworded all references to gender since I couldn't find any images of Ish-Tib that allows their gender to be distinguished by their appearance. - - -CIS roundel OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 16:55, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
  • The date reference and introduction use "around 13 ABY," but the article body where the reference is utilized states "in 13 ABY". Which is correct? Zed42 (talk) 21:17, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
Imp
  • The comic issue is explicitly set "approximately thirteen years after the Battle of Yavin". You should be able to use this to greatly simplify the date ref. Imperators II(Talk) 21:28, October 14, 2020 (UTC)
Tommy
  • Are these images digital? They both seem rather low quality and grainy. Tommy-Macaroni 13:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
    • The infobox image is, and I've replaced the other with the digital release. Even so, both are still rather low quality for whatever reason, but it's the best I could find. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 14:01, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
  • "Colonel Elzian participated at a battle over the planet Pallaxides against the Imperial Remnant aboard an MC80 Liberty type Star Cruiser" - this is currently suggesting the Imperial Remnant was aboard the MC80.
  • Ref note 3 uses inconsistent italisisation. Are you using Empire Lost 3 or Empire Lost 3? Either is fine as we don't have policy on which should be used for Legends (yet), but please make your usage consistant.
  • "Colonel Elzian then noted General Solo's lack of rest during his tireless watch over the battle before being interrupted by Solo, who acknowledged the colonel's concern and relinquished command of the Republic's forces to subordinate."
    • This is kinda long, I think it could use breaking up.
    • Do you mean "the subordinate" or something similar? At the moment this doesn't make sense.
  • If the Republic officer who contacted Solo has dialogue, he should be notable enough to warrant an article. Tommy-Macaroni 19:28, 3 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Sorry for the lateness of my replies to those. I just have one more thing. The main quote says Solo had watched the battle for "nearly forty-eight hours," but in the article text you say "over forty-eight hours." Is there something else in the source making you say "over" or does the article need to be changed to reflect the quote? Tommy-Macaroni 22:32, 5 January 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:15, 10 January 2021 (UTC)