Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Eckerd (second nomination)

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Eckerd

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 00:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Project Hero returns.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 22:05, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. Copy edit Dentface (talk) 17:12, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. Minnabird Naboo (talk) 16:29, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:26, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:23, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 17:31, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • I'm not convinced that the last bit of the bts after you mention "Vanished" is really necessary. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 23:03, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Affiliations in infobox should list the Republic itself (the highest level of affiliation), followed by the specific group Eckerd belongs to. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:56, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 21:57, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
      • It's completely unchanged. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:35, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Fixed it myself. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:55, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
          • Apologies, there's an unsaved edit in one of my tabs on this laptop. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 02:08, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Can you establish the Surgeons' members on its first mention in the body?
  • Rusk learning about the squad's actions is a biographical detail, not really suited for P&T, though the part about him considering them the best soldiers is fine. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:07, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  • "Biography" and "Personality and traits" quotes need more context. In the latter's case, neither the quote nor the attribution mention Eckerd. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:22, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
Minnabird
  • Depending on how you respond to Shayanomer's objection to P&T, that quote might need more contextualization in the attribution to link it to the section. (Except for that stuff, looks great to me; I made one copy edit per Merriam-Webster's stylization of the phrase "prisoners of war"). Minnabird Naboo (talk) 15:29, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • I think an image of Rusk could be added to the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:47, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Some additional details from the conversations that I think could be added: The squad killed the families to send a message to the Empire and all confessed to their crimes as they were proud of what they'd done. Rusk also describes them all as young meaning they had long sentences ahead of them. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:47, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
  • In the intro you specify that they were arrested for murdering the families, but you don't actually make that connection in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:47, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
    • All done. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 23:24, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
      • I think you should say he was young at the time of the arrests rather than during the first mission since it then shows the character was young during all of the events prior to the arrests as well and so gives a little more info. Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:59, 10 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:31, 11 August 2021 (UTC)