Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/EG-30

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EG-30

• Nominated by: RattsT (talk) 08:17, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:He's a just a funky little droid.

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UberSoldat

• Missing a "Characteristics" section, see the Layout Guide for more information. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:22, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 08:38, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
• Is it possible to provide a date with a reference instead of "Decades later,"? UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:48, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • As far as the comic goes, not really. The Tales stories are all nebulously "sometime later." I can get more specific on the GE info though. RattsT (talk) 08:52, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • Added a bit about GE. RattsT (talk) 08:58, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • If I may interject here, the Tales from Wild Space comics can probably be placed during the time of the First Order. I'm not 100% sure if any of the other comics also confirm this, but the most recent story, The Lost Stories, Part 1, features Emil Graf in the present time, and includes the First Order. Zed42 (talk) 09:01, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
      • Forgot about that. This particular issue doesn't give any hints to the timeline, though. Is it fair to assume that they all take place after TLJ? RattsT (talk) 09:05, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
        • Maybe not necessarily after TLJ, since it's unknown how much time passes between each story (or if they're in chronological order) but more generally around the time of the First Order-Resistance war. Zed42 (talk) 09:07, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
          • Alright, added a note. RattsT (talk) 09:16, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
            • "First Order–Resistance war" is a conjectural title, try rewording it into something like "the war between the First Order and the Resistance". UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:18, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
              • Got it.RattsT (talk) 09:21, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
                • Much better. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:22, February 3, 2020 (UTC)

Spooky

• Tatooine needs context in the biography, and both it and Batuu can be established to be in the Outer Rim.
• Could you add the years relating to the Battle of Yavin, and the Hosnian Cataclysm?—spookywilloww^talk 01:33, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • Addressed both. RattsT (talk) 04:50, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
• The Datapad appearance should use the {{DatapadCite}} template, with the relevant screenshots.—spookywilloww^talk 20:00, February 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • I don't currently have access to the Datapad right now, but I'm traveling to Florida later this month. Until then, I can't access any of the app's info, unless someone else on here has it. RattsT (talk) 01:30, February 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • One of the screencaps you're looking for can be found in here; everything cited to the GE park overall should specifically cite the DatapadCite or to the other specific part of the park. Our Datapad screenshot collection isn't complete, though, so I'd recommend asking someone like Master Fredcerique to see if you're missing anything else relevant.—spookywilloww^talk 18:14, February 12, 2020 (UTC)
      • I can see about getting some screenshots today. MasterFredcerique 17:08, February 13, 2020 (UTC)
        • So....I'm not seeing this anywhere on the Datapad here in California. I wonder if it's different in Florida. I would still check while you're visiting later this month. MasterFredcerique 08:08, February 14, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• The nomination is being archived per AgriCorps vote held on IRC. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:00, February 24, 2020 (UTC)