Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Durgolosk

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Durgolosk

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:27, January 12, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: CAnom for burner that was to long.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Assuming other objections are dealt with. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:09, February 27, 2014 (UTC)
2. Winterz (talk) 18:30, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
3. Cade Calrayn 22:25, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
4. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:19, March 12, 2014 (UTC)
5. Assuming Tope's satisfaction. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:24, March 12, 2014 (UTC)
6. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:55, March 12, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Cadeth

• You can beef up that intro with another sentence. Size, habitat, etc.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:50, March 1, 2014 (UTC)
• I rewrote a few sentences of the biology, but are the tentacles coated with the venom or do they inject it?
  • It just says they're tipped with it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:50, March 1, 2014 (UTC)
• There were quite a few careless errors, grammar mistakes, and missing words. Please take a look at my copyedit to see exactly what I mean. Cade Calrayn 00:32, February 14, 2014 (UTC)
  • Apologies and thanks for the review. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:50, March 1, 2014 (UTC)

Toprawa

• What "other limbs"? The article gives no explanation for what this means: "and a pair of arms attached above the other limbs" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:25, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • The legs mentioned immediately beforehand? Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:54, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
    • Then why refer to the legs as the "other limbs"? It makes it sound like you're attempting to reference something completely new. Just say "above the legs." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:13, March 12, 2014 (UTC)
      • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:58, March 12, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:55, March 12, 2014 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

1. Idle objections two weeks old. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:08, March 1, 2014 (UTC)
2. For great justice. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 06:09, March 1, 2014 (UTC)