Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Duja's brooch

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Duja's brooch

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 03:02, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I…genuinely struggled to find any quotes. The brooch is weirdly mentioned in a somewhat cutscene with no dialogue, and the initial mention of her picking it up has little to no dialogue either, and none that seemed relevant to the pin (on my pass of it, anyway). If there is a quote someone feels should be added, do let me know, might've missed one.
  • Date Archived: 15:34, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 518 words (119 introduction, 372 body, 27 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:CHISSWP:WOMENWP:GE

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

ACvote I'm impressed. So many on Wookieepedia thought of me and WookieeProject Chiss as a joke, or didn't notice us at all. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:56, 23 April 2023 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- Imperators II(Talk) 10:16, 10 May 2023 (UTC))
Nicely done! we'll make a Chisspedian out of you yet BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 18:05, 25 April 2023 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- Imperators II(Talk) 10:16, 10 May 2023 (UTC))
  1. Inqvote Since the bylaws revamp passed, we can now spam Inqvotes on GANs as well. Laughs in evil. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 16:06, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. Oh so that's the true motive behind the vote. Teh evil indeed. OOM 224 (he/him) 22:37, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 17:04, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote That was always allowed, Luca :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:17, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Yes, but only one per nomination. :P LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:16, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  5. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:30, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Samonic
  • I don't think you should mention that Amidala obtained the brooch after Duja's death in "Description," that shouldn't be mentioned there. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 12:19, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
Ziara
  • i'd like to see the starship type/class (Nomad Four) as context at first mention of the Possibility
  • i think you could round up dating for when Duja served as a handmaiden to Padme - sometime between 28 and 19 BBYBloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 23:40, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed both.—spookywillowwtalk 02:08, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
      • body says 28-19BBY while the date note says 32-19BBY — i figured 28 BBY originally because we know Duja wasnt a handmaiden during Padme's queen-ship (32-28BBY), but if you wanna keep it a bit vague with 32-19BBY i think thats fine as well BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 00:20, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
        • Hmm, must've had a moment where I was considering going one way, then went the other. I did opt to keep it vague though; harder to find an explicit mention of handmaiden recruitment outside of the Timelines piece. Made consistent, though.—spookywillowwtalk 00:29, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
Uber
  • Small inconsistency: Intro says the brooch appeared as if it was made by a child, but there's no mention of this in the body. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:29, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:33, 19 May 2023 (UTC)