Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Dubrillion

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Dubrillion

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 17:14, September 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Really, I think this thing is ready to go Good.

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Support

Object

  1. Cade
    • No sourcing in the introduction.
    • The first paragraph of the intro should be merged with the second - and while doing so, please try to merge some of the sentences to make it flow better. For example, try "The sister world of Destrillion, it was located in the Dubrillion system of the Myto sector of the Outer Rim." Also, please mention the system and sector of the planet.
    • More quotes!
    • Please take a look at the Layout Guide for planet articles. You're missing Description, Inhabitants, and Locations sections - there's enough information on all of those topics to have sizable sections.
    • The history section is far too subdivided... take a look at other planet GA's to get a better idea of how the section should go.
    • You also don't need that many paragraphs, in my opinion. Some of the shorter paragraphs at the end can be merged together. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 20:33, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

  1. ACvote Unaddressed objections two weeks old. Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 21:52, October 8, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 01:59, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 22:20, October 10, 2012 (UTC)