Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Derrin Weller

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Derrin Weller

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Assuming Cav's satisfied. Winterz (talk) 16:49, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 21:50, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:27, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:34, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Good work here.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:11, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Cav
  • You describe him as a Jedi Knight, but the fact he has an office in the Masters' Retreat seems to indicate he holds that rank - would this be contradictory info worth noting in the BTS at all?
    • Done.
  • A little something on the apprentice and Din's success should be noted after Weller sends them off. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:03, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
Winterz
  • In the biography, you use Masters once, and while I assumed you didn't wish to speculate on them being Jedi Masters, explaining why you didn't link it there, however I checked the Hero of Tython's article and there it says that it trained as a Jedi under these masters, so it's safe to assume that they weren't teaching him how to cook and were certainly Jedi Masters. Anyway, one of those articles will have to change, if it's Weller's then remember to link it first there. Winterz (talk) 03:25, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
    • Decapitalized. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 04:15, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
      • Nice evasion, but still not pleases my objection. In your HOT FAn, you say that he trained as Jedi under several masters, so it's safe to conclude that it's referring to Jedi Masters, yet you don't make that assumption in this article. Due to this, I'll say it again, one of the articles must change its wording, because it is certainly incorrect. In case you still don't understand why my whining, it's because you in this article decided not to link masters, and only do it afterwards, but if the masters is referring to Jedi Masters then it surely needs to take precendence and be linked. Winterz (talk) 14:26, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
        • Winterz, it says the same thing on both articles. It's speculation to assume that they were actual Jedi Masters, and I refer to them as Weller does - "masters". Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:06, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
          • Cade, if you were being teached arts by an individual who held the title of Professor, would it be speculative if we assumed that he was an arts Professor? Lol. Anyway, do what you wish, I'll strike my objection but I still think your opposition to my objection is pretty blank. Winterz (talk) 15:30, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
            • As the conversation files say "Masters," I've altered it accordingly. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 16:18, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The last Bio paragraph and the BTS could use paragraph breaks. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:41, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 21:47, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
      • Read the entire objection. :P Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:55, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
        • Blarg. I'm trying to multi-task an IRC discussion, nominations, and TOR. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 22:00, March 4, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:12, March 5, 2013 (UTC)