Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Derra system

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Derra system

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:35, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The last GA I have planned from Rise and Fall (I'm sure atleast one of the remaining CAs will actually end up going over)
• Date Archived: 19:32, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 817 words (64 introduction, 486 body, 267 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 568 words (65 introduction, 383 body, 120 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:46, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 03:19, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 01:36, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
4. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 19:31, 15 September 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• The page should note some info from The High Republic: The Rising Storm, that a group of Jedi Vectors were sent from Derra to the Cyclor Shipyards to assist in attack by the Nihil Lewisr (talk) 20:04, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Added a new section. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:50, 10 September 2024 (UTC)

Tommy

• "the rebels had been moving supplies through the Derra system on the Outer Rim" - Unless I'm missing something, the article should be updated to reflect the system's location in the Outer Rim.
  • Ah, I'd missed that and assumed it was "through," but the book also places the system in the Expansion Region with the "rebel shipping routes in the Expansion Region and narrow the list down to Derra" line, so I've added this an error to the BTS given all the other sources saying it's Expansion. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:50, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
• "Imperial Navy considered the action a near-perfect victory" - I assume this is derived from the book stating that "as far as the Imperial fleet were concerned, it was a near perfect victory", but I think this Imperial fleet is just the Sloane + 7th Fleet group that took part in the battle. The next clause is "and one achieved entirely from their own merits," which wouldn't make sense if this is talking about the Imperial Navy at large. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 15:13, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
  • You could be right, I've changed up the wording to match the book. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:50, 10 September 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:31, 15 September 2024 (UTC)