Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Danta Belissa

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Danta Belissa

• Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:47, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 17:44, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
2. Dentface (talk) 09:55, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:17, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:42, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
5. Gasy OOM 224 21:15, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• Does a source explicitly say Belissa's fate after the Imperial occupation began was unknown? Because otherwise that's irrelevant and borderline speculative. Fan26 (Talk) 23:39, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes, the source it's cited to, Galaxy Guide 3: The Empire Strikes Back (Second Edition). Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:45, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• You have a duplicate reference in the first Biography paragraph.
• Intro says he reported directly to Blendin, while body doesn't make it explicitly clear. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:20, 31 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed both. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 12:54, 31 May 2022 (UTC)
    • From reading the book again, reworded the text about Blendin. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:56, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
• Another inconsistency between the intro and body comes from the fact that the body does not make it clear that Blendin extorted Belissa, only that the money made its way to him somehow. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:25, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 12:44, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• Please see my copy-edit
• The "rare antiquity from the days of the Old Republic" tidbit is worth mentioning in the prose as well
• Just to confirm, is it appropriate to link "money" to Galactic Credit Standard?
• "the Alliance to Restore the Republic's YT-1300 light freighter Millennium Falcon" — there's too much context here. This isn't relevant information. OOM 224 20:52, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
  • All addressed. Copy-edit looks good, fixed one misspelling. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:08, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:15, 1 July 2022 (UTC)