Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Csilla's sun

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Csilla's sun

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 02:50, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: the first third of many Ch'astro GANs
• Date Archived: 16:03, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 399 words (70 introduction, 269 body, 60 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss WP:Novels WP:AST

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Presuming Samonic's dating objection gets addressed. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:14, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:24, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
3. Samonic ^(Talk) 10:37, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 15:24, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
5. Lewisr (talk) 16:02, 8 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• The intro is pretty long for a 450 words long article, could you reduce it?
• I don't think the exodus should be mentioned in "Description" since it's part of the sun's "History."
• Timelines updates?
  • The mission to Pleknok took place by 27 BBY, the article should be updated accordingly. See User:Samonic/Sandbox. Samonic ^(Talk) 13:20, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
    • per discord discussion - months before 19BBY dating is more accurate BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 03:29, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
• (Review note and reminder for self) As UberSoldat93 pointed out on Discord, Legends appearances that feature Csilla may describe the sun, so we'll have to check those.
• (Review note) Here's my copy-edit. Samonic ^(Talk) 09:05, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
  • addressed BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 19:53, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• (Review note) copy-edit; mindful to remember the grid square category.
• History's quote caption should be tied to the sun itself somehow, could be by tacking something like ', which was used on the sun' or something similar.—spookywilloww^talk 03:50, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
  • thanks for the copy-edit, didn't know we had cats for individual grid squares lol. amended the quote caption, hows that? BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 11:33, 8 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:03, 8 May 2023 (UTC)

Vote to strike objection (AC only)

1. As Sam's on Wookieevacation and has indicated he doesn't mind outstanding objections struck, starting the formal ball rolling on these so they don't hold up things; for all of the above ones.—spookywilloww^talk 19:36, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
2. :P Samonic ^(Talk) 09:59, 2 May 2023 (UTC)